L Milton Hankins Poet Limerick

A Promising Fellow

I once knew a fellow from Pensacola
Who drank liters of fizzy Coca-Cola 
He peed in the street
And on his bare feet
Now I think he is enrolled at Loyola.

written June 27, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger June 30, 2021 at 11:26 PM Loyola is proud today I bet. L Milton Hankins July 1, 2021 at 7:30 AM Or else they are filing a lawsuit!

Michelle Faulkner June 28, 2021 at 1:38 PM Not sure if Loyola has a good or bad reputation, but this is good for a smile either way :) L Milton Hankins June 28, 2021 at 2:24 PM LOL. I used it because it rhymed. Did you ever try to rhyme Coca-Cola??? Thanks, Michelle, for your comment.