A Prism of Color-Cq

quivering wings
on windless day
in flowers sway
hummingbird moth

drops of nectar
glisten in sun
rainbow colors
unfold the dawn




August 31, 2019
Charlie-Quadku Poetry Contest
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Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 5:55 PM
wow, there you go again, wowing me. Congrats on a well deserved win. For me, one of the very best.
Adams Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 6:18 PM
thank you so much my friend :) hugs
La France Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win, excellent **
Adams Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 12:39 PM
Thank you very much....heading over to view the winners now... hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:11 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Haiku, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 12:39 PM
Thank you so much my friend...i have to go check the list out...playing catch up now :) hugs
Mcgee Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:12 AM
Absolutely beautiful imagery. Congrats on your top win.
Adams Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Thank you so much Jeanne, just got home, haven't seen the winner's list yet :) hugs
Messina Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 6:21 AM
Beautiful Sandra. Great imagery with a nice flow to this colorful write :) Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Charlie
Adams Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Thank you for hosting this cool contest and the honor of a win my friend :) hugs
Green Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Absolutely beautiful, there always seems to be a splash of nature in your work that makes it all the more enchanting. This is how every day should be. Thank you for this amazing picture you have created in my mind.
Adams Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Chris for your kind comments, nature’s beauty is all around, like you I have learned to enjoy it every chance I can :) hugs
Dutta Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:50 PM
Good Move. Me also focused on rainbow.
Adams Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 2:38 PM
Thank you so much Anisha :)
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 7:37 AM
gorgeous imagery Sandra, I'd love to see a hummingbird for real! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Adams Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Thank you Jan...i am blessed to watch them all day long, until the weather turns cooler than i won't see them again until next year...hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 6:30 PM
This is a pretty one. Good luck in the contest.
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Thank you Rick, i remember my first encounter with a hummingbird moth, i thought it was a hummingbird until i saw the antennae then i was afraid of it...lol, i am used to them now though, they are almost as pretty as the hummingbirds, though i prefer the birds over moths! :) hugs
Faulkner Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Rainbow colors definitely, picture perfect ending, wonderful contender for the contest!
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 6:06 PM
Thank you...I am hoping i did the form correctly, the example showed two so i did two :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 12:36 PM
So lovely, So well written, Sandra. (are you Sandy sometimes, sometimes, Sandra?)
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 4:00 PM
thank you for asking :) hugs, enjoy your weekend!
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Thanks--Sandy it is!
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 12:48 PM
I changed it to sandy but it confused people so I put it back to Sandra. My birth name is Sandra but I prefer Sandy... thank you :) hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Choice words set in motion its flow -- NICE, ~ Aloha William
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Thank you my friend, I am not sure If I penned it right for the contest but inspiration came quick :) hugs
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