A Pretender To Love

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For one last chance at happiness, you'll risk another broken heart. And pursue your dreams with passion; not letting lies tear you apart. Lust is a pretender to love; paving the way for thoughts of bliss. But approaching exaltation; you know, only love feels like this! With Cupid's unwavering aim, love conjoins two hearts into one. And they are inseparable; once His magic arrow is done. Love is a mix of emotions; the most fragile of which is trust. Yet, only it and love can last forever, beyond bones and dust.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/13/2018 2:37:00 PM

Love your opening two lines "For your one chance at happiness you’ll gladly risk a broken heart." Well done, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2018 3:09:00 PM

Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/3/2015 5:57:00 AM

Emile such an opening line, the determination innate in a person who wants love!!! Love the last stanza and the last line to top it all!~Olive Eloisa =')

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/3/2015 8:30:00 AM

Thanks so much Olive, I appreciate your comments and your support. Emile.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/3/2015 2:41:00 AM

Your fascinating piece depict vivid imagery that guide the readers to see the beauty within true love and love to live a meaningful life..... Your descriptive is wise and excellence..... The truth that flows within teach the readers a great lesson...........A.M.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/3/2015 8:29:00 AM

Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/3/2015 2:37:00 AM

Your fascinating piece depict vivid imagery that guide to see the beauty within true love and love to live a meaningful life..... Your descriptive is wise and excellence..... The truth that flows within teach the readers a great lesson...........A.M.