A Pregnant Lass

A pregnant lass with eyes of glass had never learned to cope;
once set adrift her fall was swift, she slid a slipp’ry slope.
She fled the curse of worlds perverse by shooting shots of dope,
and stalked discreet’ Asylum Street her daily horoscope.
The stray was struck by passing truck which was her only hope.

Well, Banjo Boy, with little joy, he strums her life entire:
“The wayward waif was never safe; her stars were dark and dire
(born midst the rues and avenues where lack and want aspire)
for no one heeds the childish needs that little ones require;
though faith survives in tempest lives, a swirl within the briar,
infinity grinds as time unwinds, until the winds expire.
Her last caprice? The final peace that no one could deny her - 
whipped by the flood, stray beads of blood are spattered on the spire;
though beads of sweat are cool and wet, cold clotted blood is dryer.”

Though broken there, she’s fled the snare with dying thoughts serene.
And now she’s dead, the rumours spread: her age? a sweet 16,
with child, unwed, her soul stained red, her body so unclean.
A place is sought where she can rot, avoiding churchyard scenes,
in limey pits, as well befits, behind forbidding screens;
and all the while a dirge is styled on tattered tambourines
which echo through the human zoo in valleys of the Queens.

Without rejoice, in hissing voice, near soil that’s seldom trod
“In pious role, God bless my soul”, was mouthed with mitred nod,
 (the twisted grin seemed dark and thin behind the robed façade).
“She’ll burn in hell with sulphur smell”, spat Priest and man of god.

Well, angels sweet with cloven feet, they sing in girl’s attire,
but Banjo Boy, he’s playing coy while chanting in the choir:
“The clueless search within the church to find what they desire,
but near the nave or gravelled grave, there is no Rectifier.”
And when he’s through, without ado, he stacks some stones nearby her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cavanaugh Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 10:31 AM
Another amazing poem Terry. It seems that you are writing them faster than I can read them.
Scott Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 12:37 PM
COOL WRITE MATE YOUR EXPRESSION IS WICKED DAVIDSCOTT
Harrington Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Fabulous rhyme! Love it. Such a sorrowful tale, told so well. :) Tanya
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 7:51 AM
This is brilliant Terry don't know how I missed it xx
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 6:21 PM
Wow! I wanted to read this because i am pregnant, i was pleasantly surpirized by what i found. The story you told here was vivid and heart wrenching! You deserve applause you have a great talent here!
Wesley Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 3:01 PM
A fabulous write Terry, so complex in design and the wording delivers a knock out puch that drives the message home. Wow!
Gooden Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Terry, love your art; stanza three's my favourite. Will continue reading your work. Great show.
Sullivan Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 9:00 AM
Fantastic Terry, really loved this so much. I can tell by reading it so much time, thought, and effort went in to writing this. Like reading a story. Brilliant xx
May Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Brilliant write Terry....i love the triple rhymed lines....a classic...luv...Joseph
Horne Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 10:44 AM
awesome write, Terry - love this form
Collins Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Dear Terry, This deserves some of kind of award. Have you written the quotes as well or are they drawn from somewhere else. No matter, your style is so compelling to say nothing of the content. Bravo! love, Kathy
Sullivan Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 9:01 AM
I agree Kathryn totally fabulous xx
St.Cross Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 6:13 PM
‡ Excellent Gripping Profound Verse, Somber Unrehersed * Descending Unto The Throne Below A Key Within This Hand * Part Their Curse A Darkened Hearse; The Sanctums Bells Did Ring * So They Shall Flee From Tombs You See, Both, As 'You & Me' ˜ Love Your Sweet Beauties Poetry; Classic All The Way & Thank You, Beautiful Lady, For Your Joyfuls Visit * My Luv, Rachel ‡
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 10:28 AM
eloquently penned Rachel.
Kiya Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 6:07 PM
very insteresting it has lots of twist you are starting to lean to my kind of writing hope you are well 5 stars
Campi Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Quite a creative piece of work. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for reading my work, Jancarl. PS: I love the night. Perhaps it is because I work so many years the grave yard shift. Ladies of the evening were my best companions.
Sathasivam Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 5:44 AM
Excellent. Very creative work. Tfs
Ludden Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 7:21 PM
much to think about in this one--you've captured the irony of a situation if not duplicating the circumtances of this particular poem, does exist in thrust. Certainly an effective satire in churchly attitudes toward "sinners" in general. Very good work
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