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A Pregnant Lass

A pregnant lass with eyes of glass had never learned to cope; once set adrift her fall was swift, she slid a slipp’ry slope. She fled the curse of worlds perverse by shooting shots of dope, and stalked discreet’ Asylum Street her daily horoscope. The stray was struck by passing truck which was her only hope. Well, Banjo Boy, with little joy, he strums her life entire: “The wayward waif was never safe; her stars were dark and dire (born midst the rues and avenues where lack and want aspire) for no one heeds the childish needs that little ones require; though faith survives in tempest lives, a swirl within the briar, infinity grinds as time unwinds, until the winds expire. Her last caprice? The final peace that no one could deny her - whipped by the flood, stray beads of blood are spattered on the spire; though beads of sweat are cool and wet, cold clotted blood is dryer.” Though broken there, she’s fled the snare with dying thoughts serene. And now she’s dead, the rumours spread: her age? a sweet 16, with child, unwed, her soul stained red, her body so unclean. A place is sought where she can rot, avoiding churchyard scenes, in limey pits, as well befits, behind forbidding screens; and all the while a dirge is styled on tattered tambourines which echo through the human zoo in valleys of the Queens. Without rejoice, in hissing voice, near soil that’s seldom trod “In pious role, God bless my soul”, was mouthed with mitred nod, (the twisted grin seemed dark and thin behind the robed façade). “She’ll burn in hell with sulphur smell”, spat Priest and man of god. Well, angels sweet with cloven feet, they sing in girl’s attire, but Banjo Boy, he’s playing coy while chanting in the choir: “The clueless search within the church to find what they desire, but near the nave or gravelled grave, there is no Rectifier.” And when he’s through, without ado, he stacks some stones nearby her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/5/2012 10:31:00 AM
Another amazing poem Terry. It seems that you are writing them faster than I can read them.
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Date: 9/18/2012 12:37:00 PM
COOL WRITE MATE YOUR EXPRESSION IS WICKED DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 8/7/2012 3:05:00 PM
Fabulous rhyme! Love it. Such a sorrowful tale, told so well. :) Tanya
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Date: 7/24/2012 7:51:00 AM
This is brilliant Terry don't know how I missed it xx
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Date: 7/19/2012 6:21:00 PM
Wow! I wanted to read this because i am pregnant, i was pleasantly surpirized by what i found. The story you told here was vivid and heart wrenching! You deserve applause you have a great talent here!
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Date: 7/17/2012 3:01:00 PM
A fabulous write Terry, so complex in design and the wording delivers a knock out puch that drives the message home. Wow!
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Date: 7/15/2012 2:21:00 PM
Terry, love your art; stanza three's my favourite. Will continue reading your work. Great show.
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Date: 7/15/2012 9:00:00 AM
Fantastic Terry, really loved this so much. I can tell by reading it so much time, thought, and effort went in to writing this. Like reading a story. Brilliant xx
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Date: 7/10/2012 7:30:00 PM
Brilliant write Terry....i love the triple rhymed lines....a classic...luv...Joseph
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Date: 7/9/2012 10:44:00 AM
awesome write, Terry - love this form
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Date: 7/9/2012 8:44:00 AM
Dear Terry, This deserves some of kind of award. Have you written the quotes as well or are they drawn from somewhere else. No matter, your style is so compelling to say nothing of the content. Bravo! love, Kathy
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 7/15/2012 9:01:00 AM
I agree Kathryn totally fabulous xx
Date: 7/8/2012 6:13:00 PM
‡ Excellent Gripping Profound Verse, Somber Unrehersed * Descending Unto The Throne Below A Key Within This Hand * Part Their Curse A Darkened Hearse; The Sanctums Bells Did Ring * So They Shall Flee From Tombs You See, Both, As 'You & Me' ˜ Love Your Sweet Beauties Poetry; Classic All The Way & Thank You, Beautiful Lady, For Your Joyfuls Visit * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 11/5/2012 10:28:00 AM
eloquently penned Rachel.
Date: 7/8/2012 6:07:00 PM
very insteresting it has lots of twist you are starting to lean to my kind of writing hope you are well 5 stars
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Date: 7/8/2012 10:08:00 AM
Quite a creative piece of work. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for reading my work, Jancarl. PS: I love the night. Perhaps it is because I work so many years the grave yard shift. Ladies of the evening were my best companions.
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Date: 7/8/2012 5:44:00 AM
Excellent. Very creative work. Tfs
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Date: 7/7/2012 7:21:00 PM
much to think about in this one--you've captured the irony of a situation if not duplicating the circumtances of this particular poem, does exist in thrust. Certainly an effective satire in churchly attitudes toward "sinners" in general. Very good work
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