A Porno-Graphical Slamming Rebuttal

Seems like I could be on top of the world.
I think about poetry like my tongue is pearled.
Just the other day I wrote a poem to honor another poet.
I spun around in a spin to unfurl to the Soupers whorled.
I know they think they’re the bombshell.
They are big headed and believe their words cast the spell.
They vortex puts us in a whirlpool.
They billow swells.
Soupers let’s keep it real.
The universe zeal.
We entertain each other with our thoughts.
Poetry is our appeal.
We write to regale.
Anything else considered is to no avail.
I laugh aloud.
Soupers the advantage is a tall tale.
I am here to share-out.
That there is such a thing as an amateur in the house.
I know many fill the title of a poet professional.
This is where real skills are grandeur and profound.
Soupers, the truth expose.
A writer’s right shows.
Angstrom to a wavelength, the brain thinks and the mind depicts.
As a Poetess, here I throw it to the wind; that it is you with the *******.

To the Souper who asked for a rebuttal to his slam.
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Penned February 18, 2015!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Verlena, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
A   Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:40 PM
VERLENA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
Walker  Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Thanks PD. Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 11:47 AM
A very entertaining slam. A belated congrats on POTD!
Walker  Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Thanks Richard for your belated congratulation. Verlena
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 9:14 PM
Great slam, Verlena! I can tell you had a lot of fun writing this one...Congrats on TPOD and big hugs, Rhonda
Walker  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 9:17 PM
Thanks Rhonda for congratulations. Verlena
Meade Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Wham - bam I really loved this slam. Congrats on POTD.
Walker  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Thanks! Verlena
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Writers write to let their true concerning emotions out, just because they don't have the skills of words doesn't mean they don't feel the emotions in their hearts. They are still poets in my heart. Blessings eve
Walker  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 12:22 PM
True true! Real real! Thanks for words that are so encouraging! Verlena
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Dropping back to say congrats on poem of the day Verlena:-) Hugs Jan xx
Walker  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Jan for the congratulations! Verlena
Eaton Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 5:52 AM
Good one Verlena. Love the ending. Congratulations on POTD
Walker  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 12:24 PM
Thanks Janet! Verlena:
Manassian Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 5:32 AM
Good one, Verlena. Slamming can be fun. I liked the ENDING! ;) Congrats on POTD
Walker  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 12:25 PM
Thanks Eileen! Verlena
D. Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Awesome slam thank you for joining in the fun and giving us all a good perspective. Ty also for exposing me to you rebuttle lolz. Awesome title I loved your slam.
Walker  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Thanks Nathan for the opportunity to have some creative fun. I've enjoyed writing this rebuttal. Verlena
D. Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:34 PM
P.S since I already punned i have to say I like the end the best
Nunez Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Another amateur in the house, Verlena. Way to go, girl! It's nice to be exposed to Poetry Slam, right when and where it's happening. Smiles and hugs from the land of thousand isles. :D Kim
Walker  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Thanks Kim for your support in this Poetry Slam... Verlena
A  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Amateur in the house. Verlena, I like the way you expose a hermits band against the best. Luv ~SKAT~
Walker  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Thanks Skat for your luv and support... Verlena
Allison Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Great slam Verlena - I am a learning so much on my poetic journey - I am definitely an enthusiastic amateur here:-) Love the power in this write and the final two lines - awesome:-) Hugs jan xx
Walker  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:49 PM
Thanks Jan for your hugs and supportive remarks. Verlena
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