Line Gauthier Poet Other

A poor welcome for spring

grey clouds hang heavy lifeless
they hover there in a weighted silence -
timid spring bloom understandably intimidated



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Constance La France March 18, 2019 at 11:10 AM Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku ~

Jan Allison March 17, 2019 at 7:21 PM We certainly have those grey clouds at the moment Line, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier March 17, 2019 at 8:41 PM Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper March 17, 2019 at 6:59 PM Great Haiku, Line, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`* Line Gauthier March 17, 2019 at 8:42 PM Thanks, Eve, for your lovely visit and compliment.

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2019 at 6:38 PM this is really good, Line. i love that twist at the end. Congrats. Line Gauthier March 17, 2019 at 6:44 PM Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Edward Ibeh March 17, 2019 at 5:27 PM Lovely! Heartiest congratulations on your win, Line!:-) Line Gauthier March 17, 2019 at 6:44 PM Thanks, Edward. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2019 at 3:19 PM - Congratulations, Line :) Line Gauthier March 17, 2019 at 6:45 PM Thanks or your visit and comment, Sunshine.

Carolyn Devonshire March 16, 2019 at 2:00 PM Don't hesitate! Come on out and bloom -- the rain will refresh you. Enjoyed your delightful haiku, Line! Hugs, Carolyn Line Gauthier March 16, 2019 at 8:49 PM For sure !! Let spring bloom for heaven's sake.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 1:56 PM - Great written in the moment, Line :) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier March 15, 2019 at 2:13 PM Thanks, Sunshine. Always appreciate your visits because God knows it's gloomy outdoors these days.

Tom Cunningham March 15, 2019 at 1:39 PM Lovely haiku Line, exactly what we have at the moment, menacing grey clouds. Good luck. Tom. Line Gauthier March 15, 2019 at 2:14 PM Thank you so much, Tom. Dare we hope for the sun to show itself in the near future!

Michelle Faulkner March 15, 2019 at 1:10 PM Like the soft suspense in this! Line Gauthier March 15, 2019 at 2:14 PM Thank you, Michelle. Much appreciated.