Notes About The Poem

A POND’S-EYE MORNING VIEW

 

Right of the center

of the cosmic stage,

the rising sun disrobes

its horizon and announces

the arrival of another bright day.

Wading towards a pond,

a family of cute ducks,

Stretch and wiggle

their yawning wings.

The chloroplast bodies

of fueling algae around the pond,

capture the shining rays of the sun;

energizing the multi-life community:-

In the pond’s park of lily pads

and varied shapes of rocks,

aroused young frogs hopscotch

from one landing to another

Barking and running the pond’s banks,

a swaggering beagle chases a thirsty squirrel

back up the trunk of its tall sage resident-tree:-

Up on the street atop the pond’s hill,

car horns blast as rushing drivers 

pass by—chatting on cell phones—

using front windshield mirrors,

getting their faces ready for the day:-

Thus, our morning view,

as my dog and I continue

our ramble around the pond:-

A POND'S-EYE MORNING VIEW

A POND’S-EYE MORNING VIEW

Right of the center
of the cosmic stage,
the rising sun disrobes
its horizon and announces
the arrival of another bright day.
Wading towards a pond,
a family of cute ducks,
Stretch and wiggle
their yawning wings.
The chloroplast bodies
of fueling algae around the pond,
capture the shining rays of the sun;
energizing the multi-life community:-
In the pond’s park of lily pads
and varied shapes of rocks,
aroused young frogs hopscotch
from one landing to another
Barking and running the pond’s banks,
a swaggering beagle chases a thirsty squirrel
back up the trunk of its tall sage resident-tree:-
Up on the street atop the pond’s hill,
car horns blast as rushing drivers 
pass by—chatting on cell phones—
using front windshield mirrors,
getting their faces ready for the day:-
Thus, our morning view,
as my dog and I continue
our ramble around the pond :-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 4:48 AM
pass by—chatting on cell phones— using front windshield mirrors, getting their faces ready for the day… a fun read! Congrats on POTD!
Lowe Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Thanks Kim. I'm pleased that you enjoyed this share of a beautiful, happy, and spiritual canvassing of a pond-side walk. In my spirit, it just kept popping up, "This is the day the Lord has mad; lets enjoy...[share]...and be glad in it." I just had to share this scene. One, peace and love.
La France Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 11:25 AM
Millard, wonderfully penned and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ⭐
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:04 PM
One, Constance. Just trying to poeticly canvas and share God's shared living canvassing of a profound allegorical message: "This is the day God has given us. Let us share, ebjoy, and be glad in it." In the onderful oneness of His onement, peace and love.
Nicole Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 6:26 PM
' a family of cute ducks, stretch and wiggle their yawning wings. ' Such an adorable image to behold. I can see this in my mind. : ) A delight reading this beautiful gem. Congratulations Millard, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:57 PM
Many thanks, Brandy. I had to share this poetic canvassing of God's living canvas with me. Yes, another God given day. A day to share, enjoy, and be glad in. No matter what the challenges are, each day, God will navigate us through it. One. peace and love.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win..............
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:50 PM
Thanks, Paula. Just my shared poetic canvassing of God's living canvassing of the spiritual awareness of being in another day of His healing grace. Another day, to share with others, and collectively enjoy and be glad in. One, peace and love.
Rodgers Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 11:03 AM
Dear Millard, Congrats on POTD and what a refreshing, vibrant, and delightful slice-of-life canvas! Such a wonderful sense of scale in this piece. A joyful, observational, and deeply restorative morning ramble of a poem! Blessings, Daniel
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:43 PM
Many thanks, Daniel. I am so pleased you grasped this allegorical poetic canvassing of Of God's living canvassing of nature and life to us. There it was! "This is they day the Lord has made. Let us enjoy and be glad in it." I just had to shared this share with others. To God be the glory. In the onderful oneness of His onement, thanks again. Peace and lovr.
M  Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 5:14 AM
A lovely poem Millard ….Congratulations on POTD! Debx
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:36 PM
One, Deb; thanks. I just pray that this poetic cancassing giave you the same thanks spirituality, that this living canvassing og God, gave me. Again, Thanks, Peace and love.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 4:43 AM
what a delightful scene and experience. congrats on your POTD designation.
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:31 PM
One, Sara. Thanks. This living canvased of God and His allegorical messaging through living nature, had to be shared. What a spiritual experience--shared--to be shared with others in thanksgiving grace, for a blessed day to be enjoued and glad in. Pdeace and love.
Kitchin Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 3:33 AM
Millard, a beautiful poem, nicely penned. Congratulations on POTD.
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:23 PM
One, Tania. Thanks. God shared this allegorical canvassing of nature with me; and I had to share the spirituality of its fhis living protraite of another blessed day perpendicular to the ground---in a blessed day to enjoy and be glad in. One. Peace and love.
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 2:27 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Millard - A great poem :) -
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. I just had to share the spirituality of this beautiful, living protriat of nature, that God shared with me, to share with others in having another blessed day day to enjoy and be glad in. One. Peace and love.
Gibbons Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 2:09 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved.POTD a real pleasure reading it Millard 😀 I felt like you took us on ur dog walk with u a fab write ✍️ have a fab weekend 🦋🦮🐶
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:08 PM
Many thanks, Dorothy. God shared this living canvas with me, and I had to share it with others. He uses nature in so many ways in allegorically enable us to enjoy and br glad in each day his healing grace gives us. One. Peace and love.
Jones Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 1:59 AM
Congratulations on your charming poem of the day!
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:03 PM
One, Karen. Thanks. This beautiful, allegorical cavassing of life, was a share to me from God, to be shared with others. A profound allegory canvassing of, This is the day the Lord has made. Enjoy and be glad in it." I give God the praise and thanksgiving, for using me to help others to do just this. Peace and love.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 1:00 AM
Congratulations Millard on having received Poem of the Day for your wonderful poem, it’s a lovely pond’s eye view.. Beryl
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 12:50 PM
Thanks, Beryl. I'm so happy you enjoyed this pond's eye view that God canvassed to uplift and share. One. Peace and love.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 11:32 AM
Hello Millard , You have a good view of this pond you are seeing. blessings my friend, /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 3:26 PM
Hello Millard, Your welcome. I am glad that yu shard this. peace and love, /Darlene/😊
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 12:47 PM
Thanks, Darlene. I just had to share this beautiful canvassing and thanksgiving, for another blessed day to enjoy and be glad in. One. Peace and love.
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