A Pond's Melody

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Poetry/Choka/A Pond's Melody
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1737-7768-08
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, June 08, 2025
For the International Contest, Show Me A Choka
Sponsor, Nette Onclaud, 06/12/2025

FIRST PLACE

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Birds tweet and chirp, as I rest by a shaded pond, where dappled sun shines ... It soaks into my body, as the pond's melody sings.

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Rob Carmack

Date: 6/11/2025 7:47:00 AM

Congrats with this.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/11/2025 7:11:00 AM

Like the soaking! Congrats!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/10/2025 10:52:00 PM

Nice depiction of melody, Congratulations.

Valsa George

Date: 6/10/2025 9:18:00 PM

I love sitting beside a clear pond and watching tiny lives making pond life vibrant. Love your choka, dear Constance. Congratulations on your top win.

JCB Brul

Date: 6/10/2025 6:22:00 PM

I imagine myself sitting beside the pond. Nice one! Congratulations.^__^

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/8/2025 5:55:00 PM

This poem reminds me to get vitamin D. Soaking in the sun is a luxury. Great poem

Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2025 3:38:00 PM

Hilda, thank you for the comment, lol and compliment, appreciate ~