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A Pond's Melody

lily pads gently, whisper secrets to the breeze, dragonflies are humming by. frogs begin their song, ripples spread on the water, twilight's tranquilized chorus. Date: June 8, 2025 Sponsor's name: Nette Onclaud Contest name: Show Me A Choka Poetry Contest Date Judged: June 10, 2025 2nd Place

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Date: 6/12/2025 12:56:00 AM
Lovely!!Congratulations brother Bernard.Stay creative! ^__^ JCB
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/12/2025 5:05:00 AM
Much thanks, Sister JCB. Just got lucky to win 2nd place. It's already an achievement. To God be the glory!
Date: 6/11/2025 7:57:00 AM
Congrats Bernard.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/11/2025 7:46:00 PM
Thanks, Sir Rob. 2nd place is better but I have to exert more efforts to bag the gold.
Date: 6/11/2025 7:22:00 AM
Very nice! Congrats!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/11/2025 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Ma'am Kim. This 2nd place win is one of my treasures. Your words mean a lot to me.

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