A Poetic Response

Oh how I love 
When that stranger walks in
He calls out to me
Asks me to begin

Wants me to sing 
him a song
About my disease
Wants me to beg 
and lie down 
To get on my knees

Wants to laugh at my shame embellish my guilt
Wants to drag me down
Wants to to tear down what i built

Yet I don't mind to sing 
In fact like to dance 
That stranger inside
He stands little chance

In shadows he lurks
In shadows he resides
When brought into light
He loses his disguise

Sure I have done this 
And i have done that
I went way further down
Than an alley cat

That stranger and me
Have been round the block
Many days and nights
Without noticing the clock

Today I see him there 
He is always nearby
He is quite sad you know
In fact makes me cry

Trying to bury his pain
To not bring it to light
Does not live in the day
Inhabits the night 

Today i don't join him
Left that life behind
I keep him nearby
To only remind

Now i play with the poets
Creates rhymes from the dust
God's voice comes right through me 
Begs me to trust

God's voice comes right through us
Yes you and yes me
God's voice comes right through us
For all the world to see

I am grateful today
For an ink slinger's tune
Now I shall retire
And go stare at the moon

A Poetic Response to a poem on recovery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/4/2017 9:36:00 AM
Hi Gorden, you have beautifully packaged the hardships of addiction to the glory of recovery! Well done!
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