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A Poet Must Brainstorm

" . . . madness . . . retain, Which rightly should possess a poet's brain." Michael Drayton (1563-1631)
a writer of poems must be quite mind fractured- we brainstorm the abyss of our thoughts deep, deep inside for our ranting looking for the broken pieces deep in the void of our life- and open old jagged wounds this writing is a mania and urge we travel the calendar of our cracked mind seeking inspiration- bright thoughts with instinctive delirium . . . a writer of poetry is spontaneous- to wander paths of the mind- forced to mend exposing self rupturing soul all in the name of poetry inspiration recollecting sad events for the sake of penning bleeding words for our readers we brainstorm- crotchet our poem at night we weave it in dreams incoherent we must write it must, must, must, must . . . _____________________________ October 19, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/A Poet Must Brainstorm Copyright Protected, ID 18-1072-614-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Brainstorm sponsor, John Hamilton Second Place
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La France Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Caren, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate ~
Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 2:45 PM
" this writing is a mania and urge we travel the calendar of our "cracked mind seeking inspiration- bright thoughts with instinctive delirium . .. " Magnificient enough-words have not yet been invented to suggest how wonderful this poem is, but this is a favorite part for me. Love the painting also.
La France Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Thanks Nick for the visit and compliment, hey where have you been ?
Trim Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 5:51 AM
Great write :)
La France Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Thanks John, Sun, Michael, Kai, Darlene, and Robert for visiting my poem with comments and congratulations ~
Lindley Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 4:30 PM
That you nailed it, comes as no great surprise to me my dear friend. That is so true, we must write! We need to express that which others keep hidden. And good poets do so to help others deal with life-show a common bond.. A fav my friend.
La France Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Thanks for the Fav
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Hello Dear Heart, yes we do write our feelings in poetry verse.We are inspired to write what our muse iforms us to create.
Neumann Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:21 AM
We must indeed. And your poem has so much insight and meaning, which I believe comes from sadness. 'A writer must be quite mind-fractured'. I guess I agree and the quality of all the winners' script proves the point. Congratulations on your deserved win, Kai
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 1:55 PM
- From deep in the soul's dark and "weave it in dreams incoherent" - Congratulations on this great poem, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 12:44 PM
A well said masterpiece Constance, congrats on a fine write and win!
La France Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Thanks Eve, John, Ralph, ML, Christopher, and Jo for visiting my poem and for commenting, so appreciated ~
Daniel Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 5:54 AM
Well said, Broken Wings:)
Flaherty Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Brilliant Write. Stone Cold 7 For 2 things or reasons Ranting And Spontaneity In the moment Own it Love this its both great and true Well said
Kiser Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 11:50 AM
A well written piece of poetry with some great imagery and you've painted a great contemporary word-painting.
Sergi Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Beautiful brainstorm description and very contemporary!! My Compliments!
Gondolf Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Much truth to what you say, Constance, when I first started writing I asked myself do I really want to bare my soul that way...but now those around me know me a bit better. Best of luck, Dear Heart. John
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 7:13 PM
I love your explanation of the brainstorm ,,, good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 6:02 PM
Thank you Victor, Paul and Andrea for visiting my poem and for the comments, I so appreciate ~
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 3:36 PM
I just saw the Halloween movie. It was pretty good!
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 3:36 PM
This is so very you, Dear Heart. You must must must keep writing and I know you will!! This theme is very difficult for me . I hope I have time this weekend to think up new poems. Keep your muse going. YOu just keep coming up with so many great poems, constance.
Callus Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Impressive! You have expressed these thoughts with the ability of a true poet/ess, Constance! Brainstorming delivers! Regards // paul
La France Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Thank you ML for visiting and for your wonderful comment, appreciate so much
Kiser Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Well this one's a "Fav" of mine now; I especially like the imagery of the lines: "we brainstorm the abyss of our thoughts" and "this writing is a mania and urge we travel the calendar of our cracked mind seeking inspiration-"; great piece of poetry!
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