A Poet In Search of a Poem-Win

A poem sleeps in my body
In an upright state,
And you come into me.

In the broadway of my heart
I think about you in the heavy traffic
About the theme to write.

I search your body
A vowel, a consonant, a simile.
To find a single- syllable-title.

I breathe only in your mouth
With the words I have in my mind
To compose a poem.

I whisper into your ears
To hear the echoes of the words
To feel the sound effect.

With overflowing ideas in my head
I touch your curved lips
To get my poem mould.

Deep in the vault of your mouth
I feel my poem & hear it
In the firmament of my heaven.

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Form : Free Verse
Dr. Ram Mehta
2nd Place win
Contest: Poems on Poetry by Kelly Deschler
**This is an old poem but never entered into a contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goswami Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Bah ! Every true poet is searching only a true poem....Congratulations, you have got her into your soul...Next we want to read the conversations between you and her....Best wishes from Bengal Sir...
A   Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Hello Dr Ram, , Congrats on your poem about poetry. always & forever -- Linda
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 7:46 AM
my kind of mellow poetry, dr. ram.. sweet congrats on your fine spot!.. huggs
Guzzi Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 3:52 PM
fav verse [I whisper into your ears To hear the echoes of the words To feel the sound effect.]Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 2:56 PM
Enjoyed this write Dr. Feels romantic and some more! Beautiful final verse! // congrats on your fine win. // paul
Johnson Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Well done dr. Meta. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Raj Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Dear Dr. Ramji, Congrats on the well deserved win. Very sensually depicted. Great write. Keep,in touch
Mehta Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 5:04 AM
Thanks dear Samji
A  Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:51 PM
very good poem Dr......SKAt
A. Sharma Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 10:43 PM
Great as ever Dr. Ram ! Well not tough for u at all,,, wid ur head full of thots,,, rather overflowing,,,, wonderful write,, congrats on great win !
Deschler Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 10:32 PM
I enjoyed this unique write on the search for inspiration. A great poem, Dr. Ram! Congrats on your win in my contest!
Mehta Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:17 PM
Thanks, Kelly, for the appreciation
Poet Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Wonderful Dr.Mehta!Nice Romantic One!
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round DR. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go my friend.. and good luck ..luv. from the "Sweetheart"
Strand Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Excellent Ist round winner Ram .Rgds Brian.You caprure the poetic trials so well here.
Devonshire Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem featured this week, Dr. Ram. I enjoyed the way this poem emerges from the inspiring words and qualities of your loved one. Best wishes, carolyn
Stella Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 10:12 AM
oh my passionate write which I enjoyed congrats dear friend on this being featured this week just bouncing around and seen this one finally loved the imagery ok now where did I place my smokes lol hot hot hot
Jordan Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Beautifully written poetry Dr. Ram - enjoyed the read very much -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj
Gorelick Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Well Dr Ram..what a magnificent poem..Reminds me of Pablo Neruda...cngrats on being featured..BG
Crisci Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Dr.Ram Mehta. You have written such a romantic and sensual poem...awakening the desire to create a poem full of passion and desire. Keep your inspiration flowing. Thanks for your kind comment today. Have a wonderful day. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week DR. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Wonderful piece Dr Ram - congrats on your well deserved feature this week - I enjoyed reading it immensely. Rgds Janette
Sweetheart Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 6:26 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup Dr. Ram... great choice.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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May 23, 2010 at 3:49 PM
Nice melding of love and writing for a creative perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured! Keep that pen flowing! Karen
Goff Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 6:07 PM
whew! beautiful intensity here! Doc! jimbo
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