A Poet Cries Real Tears

a poet cries real tears

I am speaking to you
from inside my head
I shake it and out tumbles
words in scrabble pieces
shiny lacquered squares
to build a thought 
that will express the what
and where, of my yards of thinking.

Some times it claws and rends 
a thundering lion of ideas; anger, hurt 
wanting to shred the very existence
of those who lie and cheat
expose their greed and noxious deeds
in a way that all could see
and understand that we are not sheep
who sleep upon a heap of disaster.

Again I shake and springs forth
hope and tears that carry away the anger
clear my vision to see a homeless man
helping some one in greater need
a child looking in awe at Santa Claus
asking, a gift for another
soup kitchen volunteers lining up
to feed the world.  all the many 
hidden kindnesses that travel
upward across the sky 
leaving tiny trails of light and hope.

we do not need more words
we need more people speaking out
more gentle love and understanding
breathe the air take in the hope
do not let those who are dark 
with their burden of cynicism
belittle the silver threads of humanity 
for no matter how worn the phrase 
how ill-used it may be
goodness still exists and will live forever.
GOODNESS WILL TRIUMPH!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/1/2017 10:54:00 PM
O Patricia, I love this poem. A FAVE for me.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/2/2017 9:29:00 AM
Line you are a wonderful encouragement. Thank you!
Date: 12/1/2017 4:12:00 PM
A meaningful depiction--a lesson for all--you captured the grief of those less fortunate well, and the last stanza says it all--goodness will indeed triumph--well written, Patricia!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 12/1/2017 6:02:00 AM
Now this is a deep and emotive insight to your fantastic pen.. an excellent poem..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:37:00 PM
Silent One, thank you.
Date: 12/1/2017 12:08:00 AM
Oh Patricia, your passion is off the page! I share every square and laquered letter and anger spilt here. I apologiise for my recent neglect , I have been working doing my plumbing. Hope you are warm my northern friend. Down here its been hot as hell and waited and waiting for the rain. I also noticed you changed your avatar . You have a righteous anger at unjust practise. Go on,infect the others. The world needs your salt-of-the-earth type. Hugs Jannie. Im off to read your others
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:36:00 PM
Hi Jannie, I hope all is well with you. We are having a strange start to winter here. I am glad you like the poem.
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