A Poem In Progress

Poetry is a tree that stands alone
Till it matures fully grown
Little by little it adds from birth 
Watered by emotions  full of worth
Nourished with  words simple and  complete
Creating rhythm and internal beat 

Capable of saying things quite profound
Sublime Rhymes and ideas abound
Early or late we think and create
And wait for words that relate
Sometimes inspiration can be quick as summer lightening
But brilliant ideas don’t always flow 
So in the end we may reap what we sow

It stands to reason no matter what you do
Sometimes there will be no rhyme in any  season
Even with revision  it ends up all the same 
And the poem begins to sound pretty lame

If it turns out  bad we have no one to blame
But all things being the same 
All we have left is personal satisfaction
We end up with elation or with a retraction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Helllo again Jim Joyce,I could not have said it better than that. Right on! have a nice day my frined.
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 4:01 PM
A well thought out work about poems and writing..I enjoyed reading this one today.Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there reading and taking time to comment..Sara
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