A Poem From My Daughter

Daddy, I love you
For all that you do
I'll kiss you and hug you
Cause you love me, too
You feed me and need me
To teach you to play
So smile cause I love you
On this Father's Day

              Cailyn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/8/2017 7:34:00 PM
OK, I confess to a tear or two on this one, this is so adorable. A Fav too, she takes after her dad!
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Date: 11/25/2016 11:18:00 PM
poetry bonding..... congrats on being selected...
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Date: 11/23/2016 10:28:00 PM
Poetry runs in your family! Excellent!
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Date: 11/5/2016 12:06:00 PM
A charming poem by your loving daughter Cailyn, Tim. She has a heart of love, which is beautiful to see in someone, esp in young people. Love and more love to you and yours.
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Date: 6/18/2014 4:12:00 AM
:) sweet short poem.. :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/18/2014 5:26:00 AM
Thanks Olive,.my friend... Hugs Tim
Date: 6/17/2014 5:10:00 PM
nicely done, it makes you feel good when you look at a human soul and know they are good and even better when you know you helped shape the goodness you see in them. ((( happy summer)))
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/17/2014 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Debbie... Your comment is sweet...hugs Tim
Date: 6/16/2014 12:01:00 AM
What a beautiful ode to you Tim, she sounds like a wonderful daughter, they are so precious. Take care.............Vera...........
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/16/2014 12:03:00 AM
Thank you Very my friend.... She is precious
Date: 6/15/2014 4:00:00 PM
A treasure! The poem and your daughter. Congrats on raising a lovely girl. BG
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/15/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thanks BG..it almost brought tears to my eyes when she gave it to me...hugs Tim
Date: 6/15/2014 2:56:00 PM
Ohhhhhh, how sweet! She is going to be a great poet like you, Tim :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/15/2014 3:00:00 PM
You are too kind....she is so smart...hugs Tim
Date: 6/15/2014 1:33:00 PM
- A really sweet poem from daughter to father - Love it!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/15/2014 1:52:00 PM
Thanks A-L it was a nice surprise this morning.
Date: 6/15/2014 12:40:00 PM
Awwww, what a sweet poem for you to show us on this day. HOw old is she?
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/15/2014 12:45:00 PM
She is 4 but she got help from my 14 year old daughter... We make up songs in rhyme all the time.
Date: 6/15/2014 12:07:00 PM
That is soo sweet :) your daughter has your poetic blood!! adorable!!
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Date: 6/15/2014 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Cas...She is awesome... I love her so.....hugs Tim
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