Vijay Pandit Poet Quatrain

A Poem For All Seasons

Enticing early spring, yellow daffodils smile
As cherry blossoms flaunt an ebullient style
Pulsating sweet fragrance on butterfly wings
Yellow daffodils smile, enticing early spring

Eager for warm air, the atmosphere churns
Surfing blue waters as sandy beach burns
Donning tiny bikinis inviting stealing stare
The atmosphere churns, eager for warm air

Hugging autumn's grip, meadows turn gold
Windy pastures sway wearing colors bold
Swinging barren trees stormy winds whip
Meadows turn gold, hugging autumn's grip

Grassy fields hide, under shrouds of white
Snow showers delight painting pretty sight
Crowning treetops, pleasing cheery eyed
Under shrouds of white, grassy fields hide 

April 15, 2019
Poem of the day on April 17, 2019
Placed 3rd: Your choice (4) contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George January 23, 2022 at 6:04 AM In the flurry of comments expressing great appreciation, let me add mine too . The entire seasonal change in cyclic rotation finds beautiful expression here in a single poem. Though all the lines are beautiful the following two lines stand distinct in my eyes--"Hugging autumn's grip, meadows turn gold Windy pastures sway wearing colors bold"--

Angela Crabtree December 13, 2020 at 1:02 PM You captured the seasons perfectly, Vijay. I'm ready for Spring now. I don't like the winter :)

Brandy Nicole June 9, 2019 at 8:45 PM I could stay in moments like this. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit June 10, 2019 at 8:21 AM Much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.

Suzanne Delaney May 15, 2019 at 6:04 PM Love your descriptions of the different season. They each have their undeniable charms. Love that you used the word ebullient. I remember one teacher wrote in my school report that I had an ebullient spirit and I thought I was in trouble LOL Hugs, SuZ Vijay Pandit May 17, 2019 at 7:46 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments SuZ..many thanks.

Judy Ball May 2, 2019 at 4:37 PM The seasons are always welcome bringing new colors and changes. I love each one for their different types of beauty. Winter is the time nature rests and rejuvenates herself. Spring brings new life and color t all things. And Fall is so colorful and is the time of harvest. Each beautifully described here. Excellent Well Done my friend. Congrats, God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit May 3, 2019 at 5:25 PM Much appreciate Judy..many thanks.

Panagiota Romios April 28, 2019 at 6:39 PM I missed this POTD, sorry, congratulations Panagiota Vijay Pandit May 3, 2019 at 5:23 PM Thank you Panagiota. Much appreciate.

Paul Callus April 22, 2019 at 9:07 AM Congratulations on being awarded p.o.t.d. Vijay. This lovely poem delights with its vivid imagery and sensual appeal. Indeed, a poem for all seasons. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit May 3, 2019 at 5:25 PM Thank you Paul..much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud April 21, 2019 at 11:30 AM and a big cheer for a POTD award, vijay!..huggs Vijay Pandit May 3, 2019 at 5:24 PM Thank you Nette.

Janice Canerdy April 20, 2019 at 3:27 PM Absolutely heavenly, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit April 20, 2019 at 3:30 PM Thank you Janice..much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud April 20, 2019 at 7:52 AM It's almost Easter.. Have a jptous one, vijay!...huggs Vijay Pandit April 20, 2019 at 3:29 PM Thank you Nette..much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose April 19, 2019 at 8:31 PM Your an all seasoned poet Vij, always a pleasure to read your work, Have a great Easterxo Vijay Pandit April 20, 2019 at 3:29 PM Thank you Pixie..enjoy your Easter.

Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2019 at 8:41 PM Excellent visions of spring glory Vijay. Congratulations on POTD! : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit April 19, 2019 at 2:45 PM Thanks for your visit and kind remarks..many thanks, Connie.

M. L. Kiser April 18, 2019 at 3:31 PM Great imagery; I can see it all. Every season, a beautiful pen. Vijay Pandit April 19, 2019 at 2:45 PM Many thanks..much appreciate MLK.

Jennifer Proxenos April 18, 2019 at 1:05 PM What a clever, creative poem Vijay, I enjoyed every season! Congratulations on been awarded POTD for this truly deserved write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer Vijay Pandit April 19, 2019 at 2:45 PM Much appreciate Jennifer..many thanks.

Mike Gentile April 18, 2019 at 7:01 AM Congratulations Vijay, I enjoyed reading your wonderful seasonal write and surely see why it was POTD, Beautiful !! Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:17 PM Haven't seen you much lately in this space..much appreciate your visit Mike..many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 18, 2019 at 3:51 AM Coming back to congratulate you for POTD honor, so rightfully deserved ! Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:16 PM Thank you for your return visit my friend..much appreciate.

Wren Rushing April 17, 2019 at 6:22 PM Congratulations on POTD Vijay! Well deserved my dear friend! Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:15 PM Thank you my friend..much appreciate.

Tania Kitchin April 17, 2019 at 6:11 PM Congratulations on POTD with this lovely penned seasonal poem! Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:15 PM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks..many thanks, Tania.

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2019 at 4:23 PM You captured beautifully with imagery each of the seasons!! Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:14 PM Thank you Andrea..much appreciate.

Arturo Michael April 17, 2019 at 2:36 PM Congratulations Vijay...Good people, Good Poetry...All the best my friend... Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:13 PM Much appreciate my friend..many thanks.

Manmath Dalei April 17, 2019 at 2:08 PM A brilliant quatrain. Every stanza paints a brilliant hue. Really you make me speechless. Enjoyed. Hugs..........//Manmath// Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:09 PM Much appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks, Manmath.

Brandy Nicole April 17, 2019 at 2:03 PM Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. Each season welcomes you and your words. My heart smiles knowing this fact. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:12 PM Thank you for your return visit and kind remarks Brandy..much appreciate.

Eve Roper April 17, 2019 at 1:20 PM Congratulations on your POTD, Vijay. Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:12 PM Thank you Eve..much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2019 at 12:55 PM - Excellent p.o.t.d. .... Congratulations, Vijay :) - I wish you a wonderful Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:11 PM Wish you a happy Easter Anne-Lise..much appreciate..many thanks.

Constance La France April 17, 2019 at 11:50 AM Vijay, a lovely poem and a big congratulations on POTD ~ Vijay Pandit April 18, 2019 at 12:09 PM Many thanks Dear Heart..much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

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