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Date written: 03/21/2025

A Playground of Cobwebs


forgotten by time
a playground of cobwebs 
thousands of footprints
I made in the sand 
              a lifetime ago
once so alive 
with activity and merriment 
 now a deserted place 
haunted by lingering ghosts
the silence, deafening 
reverberating e c h o e s 
of laughter and noise 
by neighborhood children 
forever lie deep asleep
what happened 
to all the roughhousing noise?
days of innocence 
long gone
            this place 
I remember so well
 isn't what it used to be;
signs of neglect 
everywhere.
I walk through 
playground of cobwebs...
what happened 
to all the noise?
where is everybody?
a shout
into the void
returns not so much as...
a faint echo.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Ibeh Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Thank you so much, Sara:-)
Layne Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Eerie. I get excited when I drive through neighbourhoods and I can see children at normal, active play ... not tethered to a device. This is a real thing. Childhood obesity is on the rise in my part of the world. Something previously unimagined. Congratulations on your writing!
Ibeh Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Thank you very much, Trina:-)
mysore Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 1:24 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Ibeh Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 3:09 AM
Thank you very much, Thriveni:-)
Lane Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 7:58 AM
This has a very deep sense of melancholy, missing loved ones in the past. Well written, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 8:09 AM
Thank you very much, Lin:-)
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