A Play Off of a Short Story

A frown 'pon his face_ bills, bills, 
                                                 into file thirteen 

As she cleans, empties the trash
        The unopened letter catches her eye
She pulls it out, with the letter opener rips it apart.
                                                             
He has flown the coup, racing  in his new sports car

She reads the letter_last notice_life insurance one-half million
                                                                  will lapse today at 6 P.M.

      He goes way to fast down a steep incline, speed and adventure his design
                                                                                                         
At speeds in excess of 110 MPH__He races onward to the mountain pass

She calls the bank to check on their accounts_he has spent all and has overdrafts

At top speeds he reaches the summit, longing for one more thrill
                             Just trying his sports car out

                                                 She
Checks the savings account, CD's  that she had put away
                                    Nothing_all gone

The only money available was what she had earned that day
                                   Tip money..
Counting out fives, ones, and change..Just enough for the premium

                                           Rushes to the bank, just a few minutes to spare

                                                   He 

Loves  adventure, thrills are divine
 
                   Foot pushing the accelerator to the floor as down the mount he flies

                                                           She

Rings the insurance company. The money is there for you to withdraw the right amount
Now covered_she can relax for another short while

                                              He

Faster and faster he goes 
                       This car handles like a dream
                                                     Round each curve and S bend makes him beam
Then close to the end of his flight of thrills
            Someone driving so slow_He hits the brake_
None to be felt, he maneuvers around _face to face with tractor-trailer

As they pull the crumpled car from under the Peterbilt_

                                                        In his
dying stupor is heard to say well she won't get any insurance  

2-7-14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/15/2014 4:35:00 PM
I enjoyed this suspenseful story and the creative way in which you told it. I liked your more modern take on the Poe tale. Well done, Sara! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Date: 3/15/2014 10:28:00 AM
Sara.... Congratulations with your awesome win...~SKAT~
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:31:00 AM
Hi, Cleverly woven tale. Congrats on your placement. Regards Theresa x
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:21:00 PM
Brilliant write on the Angel of the Odd. Congrats on a fine win, sara
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Date: 3/9/2014 5:03:00 PM
Sara, very fun way of pacing this poem between the race to the bank and race to death, congratulations on your win, enjoyed it!
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:09:00 PM
POOR poor woman!!! What a cad you created with this one but I loved it.
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:32:00 PM
I just love the layout of this write my friend! And your ingenious subject is perfectly portrayed and evident! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening! This poem plays on a fabulous twist of fate! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/7/2014 4:28:00 PM
Sara, Sara, Sara....This is wonderfully written! 7 long stemmed stars in a crystal vase to you! My best, chuck
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Date: 2/7/2014 12:19:00 PM
A good narration here Sara,with a clear message on the need to be prudent in life. A great one it is. Kudos.
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