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A Place To Die

History deals with wounds and pain Young Nick gambled in Vicky’s reign, Fell amongst sin in Freo jail Guilty of theft hung without bail. Alas not the old oak nor beech Trees with limbs stout and true in reach, Chose not the sycamore in leaf But the stump at Ningaloo reef. © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Date: 12/2/2018 8:17:00 PM
Hello Harry, congrats on your win. You wrote a great poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/16/2018 11:15:00 AM
Back with more congrats, Harry.
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Date: 11/16/2018 9:55:00 AM
Great poem Harry and congratulations on your fine top win !
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Date: 11/14/2018 8:42:00 PM
Love your poem. Congrats on First Place, Harry. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations harry, on this win. You truly created the moment here. I felt every word. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/14/2018 10:55:00 AM
Hi Harry, looks like congratulations are in order for a win my friend, so, congratulations on your win with this excellent poem Harry. It did read like a winner. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/13/2018 6:08:00 PM
Excellent work Harry! Congratulations on your first place win! : )
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Date: 11/13/2018 5:12:00 PM
Back with congrats on your top win Harry. Tom.
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Date: 11/13/2018 3:24:00 PM
Wow! Very cool poem, Harry. Felt like an introduction to Australian folk lore... Congrats on your top win! Hugs,, Carolyn
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Date: 11/13/2018 2:00:00 PM
You chose a dark theme and were well rewarded for your tale, many congratulations on your win harry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2018 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on this excellent poem! You told a compelling tale in 64 syllables. Not a wasted word. Thank you for entering the contest! A FAVE for me.
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Date: 11/13/2018 12:09:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Harry.
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Date: 11/13/2018 1:17:00 AM
- An excellent poem, Harry - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2018 9:11:00 PM
I've seen a few gems for this contest, Harry. This is one of them!
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Date: 11/12/2018 10:41:00 AM
A stunning 8x8 relating a sad story my friend, Harry! Good luck!
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Date: 11/12/2018 12:41:00 AM
Excellent dark poem. Very cleverly written. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 11/10/2018 11:30:00 AM
It is true, those that commit a crime are punished. And so they should be. Usually the punishment fits the crime, in most cases anyway. To die in the way you have described, would be quick. This is emotional. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/9/2018 3:33:00 PM
love this, Harry - very clever piece
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Date: 11/9/2018 9:13:00 AM
Good rhymes..a well written story..best for a win, Harry.
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Date: 11/9/2018 2:49:00 AM
A dark verse Harry, well written. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 11/8/2018 7:02:00 PM
very well done, this interestingly dark poem, harry. I am seeing lots of poems today using current contest themes or styles I can't wait to try.
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Date: 11/8/2018 5:59:00 PM
good read...nice and dark so truth stands out
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