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A Place of Mine

A
                                                  kiss that
                                                  no longer
                                            reaches your lips
                        just hangs in the breeze searching for a home.
                                  Only left with a memory to hold
                                               and hide away
                                                  in a place
                                                    that is
                                                     mine.

lost lovepeacetetractys

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James Rasmusson

Date: 11/25/2011 6:11:00 AM

'Tis a pleasure to take part in your contest. I like your double tetractys above- it fits the form perfectly. ~James (MeanderthalMan)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/17/2011 9:29:00 PM

Ahhh, that first kiss....this reminds me of mine with my spouse...the sweetness of life...yes, this poem has got it right...it's ALL IN THE MEMORIES! Enjoyed, Michael. Just perfect. Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 9:55:00 PM

everyone is talking about their happy places... now I'm going to go and make me one... yes Michael... hide in that one place,, that only you know of..... Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/11/2011 6:55:00 AM

So sad! Yup, greatly written :)

Tracy Edwards

Date: 11/10/2011 7:05:00 PM

So touching Michael, really sweet x0x

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/9/2011 7:48:00 PM

How I love this, so filled with wistful softness. That 5th line is a sweet heatbreaker. Thanks for the memory Michael.

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/9/2011 4:06:00 PM

This is really beautiful Michael. I am glad I came to view it. I cannot remember if I thanked you for my win in your A Kiss Like Fruit Contest but if I didn't I will now. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2011 12:01:00 AM

This one lingers in the mind like that kiss!!

M.I.A .

Date: 11/8/2011 8:28:00 PM

I simply enjoyed your soul today with all the wonderful words flowing from it. All the best wishes in the future Michael.

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/8/2011 6:25:00 PM

Wonderful, reflective, and just a bit sad...great work Michael...Margaret

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/7/2011 9:02:00 PM

Nice one I have read just now this morning. Yes, its yours. Thanks for comment on my poem. bl

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/7/2011 1:50:00 PM

* “This Soulfelt Verse * My Dear Sweet Precious Michael * Kind of Touches Ones Heart Amid A Bit of A Sombers Note * To Be Deprived of A Kisss Which May Burn Its Longing Upon Ones Spirit * What Tragedy Would There Be to Hold * May This Never Be Sooo * Very Beautiful Within A Stirring Light * Thank You * Blessings When I Behold Your Treasures In My Meek Coms Box * My Luv Always * Sarah.” *

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/7/2011 1:12:00 PM

Perhaps the only thing that is truly ours and ours alone is our memories, Michael. The longing and loneliness are conveyed so beautifully in your poem. Thanks for giving everyone a chance to see how the double-tetractys should be written. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2011 12:25:00 PM

yeowww, michael... you blew me away with this lyrical piece... your pen glows. wow! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2011 9:20:00 AM

well I think I share this place Michael luv.. a secret destination where luv abides in full bloom... excellent words ..good luck with new contest..will work on a super entry for u ...xoxo..J.G. forever...