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A Place Just Right

The Greyhound reels over creaking axles. Northern Kentucky puts on weight in summer, a green mélange thickens, yet inside our trundling tube, joints rattle, gears burn through paunch and muscle. We lurch over a crest down into a holler An old Shaker Hymn booms across the radio: When we find ourselves in a place just right 'Twill be in the valley of love and light. I have often longed to be 'in a place just right,' to be at ease in these bucking bones, even when breathing this smother of body odor and diesel. Then we dip down into a valley. At a wooden store advertising cold beers we stop. "Is this the right place?" I ask. "It’s as close as we get", says the driver.

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Date: 4/8/2020 9:10:00 PM
This is an amazing poem, Eric. Full of intrigue and textured imagery handled with finesse. Your artistry is riveting and enthralled my imagination completely. Loved the last line for an impactful finish. Impressive poetry, mi amigo! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/8/2020 11:15:00 PM
Wait.. who’s John? :)
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Eric Ashford
Date: 4/8/2020 10:19:00 PM
Thank you Susan, and thank you for delving deep into my archived stuff! Love your comments. Have great evening compadre. John.
Date: 7/12/2019 3:10:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poetry today Richard. Yes, this one works I think. It has been much edited, but hopefully it's there now. Appreciate your feedback.
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Date: 7/12/2019 8:52:00 AM
I think this is my favourite so far. Exceptional poetry.
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Date: 6/24/2019 1:54:00 PM
Hello Eric Ashford, your poem made me feel like i was on a journey. Thank you. Have a nice day my friend. So nice to meet you.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 6/25/2019 2:19:00 AM
Nice to meet you Darlene, and thanks!
Date: 6/24/2019 10:39:00 AM
This is a unique and unusual write. I enjoyed it Panagiota
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Eric Ashford
Date: 6/25/2019 2:18:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota for your kind comment.

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