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A Place

a place for everything and everything in its place
my wife’s favorite motto~not mine no wonder I can never find anything

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Date: 2/28/2025 7:16:00 PM
When my husband can’t find something, he asks me. I sometimes know where it is.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/28/2025 7:20:00 PM
Thanks for reading Kim. That seems to be the way it is in most families.
Date: 2/28/2025 10:43:00 AM
Hello oliver, thanks for the chuckle. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2025 11:26:00 AM
Hello Oliver, yes thank you for the chuckle. I will. You also enjoy your day my friend. ./Darlene/
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/28/2025 10:49:00 AM
Hello Darlene, thank you for reading. Glad I could make you laugh. Enjoy your day as well.
Date: 2/28/2025 9:59:00 AM
It’s simple, relatable, and humorous. The contrast between your poem and your wife’s motto adds some tension and the closing line delivers a wry punch.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/28/2025 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Alesia and for your kind comments.
Date: 2/28/2025 2:29:00 AM
- She knows how she wants it :))) - hugs
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/28/2025 5:13:00 AM
Yes, she does. Thanks Anne-Lise
Date: 2/28/2025 12:57:00 AM
I hear you Oliver, and you make perfect sense if not a little messed up! Such is life! Cheers David
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/28/2025 1:01:00 AM
Thanks David. I am.
Date: 2/27/2025 11:04:00 PM
She sounds well organised Oliver. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/28/2025 1:01:00 AM
She is very organized. Me not so much. Thanks Tom
Date: 2/27/2025 10:16:00 PM
Ha. I know the feeling!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/28/2025 1:00:00 AM
LOL. I think all of us have one of the couple is like this. Thanks for reading Andrea
Date: 2/27/2025 9:50:00 PM
lol, amen! Very funny.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/28/2025 12:59:00 AM
Thanks Chris

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