A Pirate's Lot

Footprints on a sandy beach,
will be washed away by morning.
There's a storm out on the open sea,
A thunderclap - a warning!
A lonely ship is tossed about,
and struggles in the hue,
its motley crew begins to shout
at the wicked card they drew...
The ship takes on a starboard list,
the crew jumps in the drink.
Lightning strikes the wooden mast,
the ship is doomed to sink.
Fear fills the hearts of those
from captain down to yeoman,
but yo this rugged life they chose
not heeding sign nor omen.
Are you really safe from shark attack,
while standing on the shore?
A mighty ship in port is safe,
but that's not what ships are for...

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/10/2015 4:22:00 PM
Well done on the placement Cole, also I enjoyed the views on the hazards of a pirates lot..'
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Date: 6/14/2015 2:01:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 6/9/2015 11:47:00 AM
Cole. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/14/2015 2:01:00 PM
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Date: 6/9/2015 5:11:00 AM
such brilliant vivid imagery - i live on a little island so am surrounded by the mighty ocean - i prefer dry land to the sea:-) Hugs jan congrats on your win:-)
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Date: 6/14/2015 2:01:00 PM
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:40:00 PM
great pen Cole congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Date: 6/14/2015 2:01:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 3/15/2014 10:04:00 AM
Good morning Cole .. Congratulations on Anthony's Island contest. ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/16/2014 5:10:00 PM
Thanks, Skat !
Date: 3/10/2014 5:59:00 PM
Cole, I so enjoyed this rhyme. I can see why it placed as a winner. Congratulations! Connie
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:31:00 PM
Thanks Connie. Glad you liked it...
Date: 3/10/2014 7:47:00 AM
Perfect! Your rhyme is great..unforced as mine so often is. congrats. BG
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Date: 3/10/2014 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much. Glad you liked this one...
Date: 3/10/2014 6:54:00 AM
hi Cole love this pen congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/10/2014 8:12:00 AM
Thank you much...
Date: 11/2/2013 11:30:00 PM
Cole, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 11/3/2013 8:02:00 PM
Thanks Linda. I'm glad. I hope more people enjoy my poetry.
Date: 10/27/2013 4:02:00 PM
come on, the last lines, really?
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Date: 10/27/2013 3:42:00 PM
Good stuff, Mr. Cole, I lived o the oceans for over 3 years, and loved every minute of it. Your last line is so full of truth.
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Date: 10/27/2013 9:04:00 PM
Thanks, Glad you liked it....
Date: 10/22/2013 7:18:00 PM
Thanks to everyone who commented on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Date: 10/22/2013 1:39:00 PM
great avatar Cole, goes perfect with your poem ,,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Linda...
Date: 10/22/2013 12:55:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Cole ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/27/2013 9:00:00 PM
Thank you. I have never been greeted from Norway. I would love to travel there someday....
Date: 10/22/2013 10:58:00 AM
Cole, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 10/27/2013 8:58:00 PM
Hello - Thanks for the kind words.... CB
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