A Pirate's Lot

Footprints on a sandy beach,
will be washed away by morning.
There's a storm out on the open sea,
A thunderclap - a warning!
A lonely ship is tossed about,
and struggles in the hue,
its motley crew begins to shout
at the wicked card they drew...
The ship takes on a starboard list,
the crew jumps in the drink.
Lightning strikes the wooden mast,
the ship is doomed to sink.
Fear fills the hearts of those
from captain down to yeoman,
but yo this rugged life they chose
not heeding sign nor omen.
Are you really safe from shark attack,
while standing on the shore?
A mighty ship in port is safe,
but that's not what ships are for...

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June 10, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Well done on the placement Cole, also I enjoyed the views on the hazards of a pirates lot..'
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June 14, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Thank you...
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June 9, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Cole. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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June 14, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Thank you...
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 5:11 AM
such brilliant vivid imagery - i live on a little island so am surrounded by the mighty ocean - i prefer dry land to the sea:-) Hugs jan congrats on your win:-)
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June 14, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Thank you...
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 5:40 PM
great pen Cole congrats on 3rd place hugs
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June 14, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Thank you...
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March 15, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Good morning Cole .. Congratulations on Anthony's Island contest. ~SKAT~
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March 16, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Thanks, Skat !
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March 10, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Cole, I so enjoyed this rhyme. I can see why it placed as a winner. Congratulations! Connie
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March 10, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Thanks Connie. Glad you liked it...
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March 10, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Perfect! Your rhyme is great..unforced as mine so often is. congrats. BG
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March 10, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much. Glad you liked this one...
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March 10, 2014 at 6:54 AM
hi Cole love this pen congrats on win hugs
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March 10, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Thank you much...
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November 2, 2013 at 11:30 PM
Cole, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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November 3, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Thanks Linda. I'm glad. I hope more people enjoy my poetry.
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October 27, 2013 at 4:02 PM
come on, the last lines, really?
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October 27, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Good stuff, Mr. Cole, I lived o the oceans for over 3 years, and loved every minute of it. Your last line is so full of truth.
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October 27, 2013 at 9:04 PM
Thanks, Glad you liked it....
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October 22, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Thanks to everyone who commented on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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October 22, 2013 at 1:39 PM
great avatar Cole, goes perfect with your poem ,,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 28, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Thanks Linda...
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October 22, 2013 at 12:55 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Cole ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 27, 2013 at 9:00 PM
Thank you. I have never been greeted from Norway. I would love to travel there someday....
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October 22, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Cole, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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October 27, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Hello - Thanks for the kind words.... CB
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