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A Pirates Delight

A mermaid lost her seaweed bra
She’s naked and cries ‘ooh la la’
Using pink cockle shells
She covers her two ‘swells’
As pirates ogle from afar!

Pirates Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

Syllables checked with how many syllables 8.8.6.6.8

4/10/19

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Carl Fraser April 21, 2019 at 1:19 AM Being a sailor and pirate wannabe i am still waiting to site my mermaid. Very enjoyable Jan. Blessings Carl

David Smith April 19, 2019 at 3:27 AM Very good. Perfect example of how to make do with what is lying around and not needing to go to shop. Have a great Easter David in NZ

Eve Roper April 18, 2019 at 9:39 PM Back with congratulations, Jan . Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2019 at 6:55 PM way to go, Jan!! Fun read and Congrats

Kevin Shaw April 16, 2019 at 3:40 PM Nice one Jan, well done on a top place, regards, Kevin x

Barbara Gorelick April 16, 2019 at 12:54 PM This is really good. deserving of your placement. Congrats. BG

Joseph May April 16, 2019 at 11:56 AM Lol..Congrats on your top win Jan..

Kim Rodrigues April 16, 2019 at 8:11 AM Congratulations, Jan! Always wondered where the first shell bra came from! LOL

Tania Kitchin April 16, 2019 at 4:59 AM Congratulations Jan, another great gem from you! Congratulations on your first place win!

Lindsay Laurie April 12, 2019 at 6:52 PM G'day Jan … she might end up with some hidden treasure after all - thanks Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison April 13, 2019 at 4:36 PM lol thanks Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong April 12, 2019 at 12:32 AM So cute Jan! I hope you are well. xxoo Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:16 AM thanks Connie, I'm fine ty hope you are over your bronchitis it certainly knocks the stuffing out of you when it gets hold:-( hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne April 11, 2019 at 2:07 PM LOL, love it Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:15 AM I think Tania knew I wouldn't be able to resist this contest!:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus April 11, 2019 at 1:33 PM This is not only a delight for pirates, but also for us readers, Jan:) Hope all is well. Hugs // paul Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:15 AM Thanks so much Paul, all fine here hope you are all well too:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta April 10, 2019 at 3:36 PM All pirates love a treasure chest! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:14 AM love that comment Rico! :-) hugs jan xx

Pashang Salehi April 10, 2019 at 12:23 PM Thank you... I needed that. Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:13 AM I was lured back to post by the creation of a limerick contest but I am not active like I once was:-( hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael April 10, 2019 at 8:15 AM Something about these limerick are so entertaining...Nice write... Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:12 AM thanks Arturo:-) :-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham April 10, 2019 at 5:52 AM Wouldn't be just the pirates arrrrrrr. Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:07 AM lol you are right Tom:-) :-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper April 9, 2019 at 9:52 PM Awesome write, Jan, good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:06 AM thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier April 9, 2019 at 8:43 PM Very cute, Jan. Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 5:05 AM thanks Line, I think Tania knew I wouldn't resist coming back in to write for a limerick contest!:-) hugs jan xx