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A Pirates Delight

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A mermaid lost her seaweed bra She’s naked and cries ‘ooh la la’ Using pink cockle shells She covers her two ‘swells’ As pirates ogle from afar! Pirates Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin Syllables checked with how many syllables 8.8.6.6.8 4/10/19

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Carl Fraser
Date: 4/21/2019 1:19:00 AM
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Being a sailor and pirate wannabe i am still waiting to site my mermaid. Very enjoyable Jan. Blessings Carl
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David Smith
Date: 4/19/2019 3:27:00 AM
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Very good. Perfect example of how to make do with what is lying around and not needing to go to shop. Have a great Easter David in NZ
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/18/2019 9:39:00 PM
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Back with congratulations, Jan . Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/17/2019 6:55:00 PM
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way to go, Jan!! Fun read and Congrats
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Kevin Shaw
Date: 4/16/2019 3:40:00 PM
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Nice one Jan, well done on a top place, regards, Kevin x
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/16/2019 12:54:00 PM
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This is really good. deserving of your placement. Congrats. BG
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Joseph May
Date: 4/16/2019 11:56:00 AM
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Lol..Congrats on your top win Jan..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2019 8:11:00 AM
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Congratulations, Jan! Always wondered where the first shell bra came from! LOL
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/16/2019 4:59:00 AM
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Congratulations Jan, another great gem from you! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/12/2019 6:52:00 PM
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G'day Jan … she might end up with some hidden treasure after all - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2019 4:36:00 PM
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lol thanks Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/12/2019 12:32:00 AM
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So cute Jan! I hope you are well. xxoo
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:16:00 AM
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thanks Connie, I'm fine ty hope you are over your bronchitis it certainly knocks the stuffing out of you when it gets hold:-( hugs Jan xx
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Jack Horne
Date: 4/11/2019 2:07:00 PM
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LOL, love it
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:15:00 AM
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I think Tania knew I wouldn't be able to resist this contest!:-) hugs jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2019 1:33:00 PM
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This is not only a delight for pirates, but also for us readers, Jan:) Hope all is well. Hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:15:00 AM
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Thanks so much Paul, all fine here hope you are all well too:-) hugs jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/10/2019 3:36:00 PM
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All pirates love a treasure chest! Aloha! Rico
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:14:00 AM
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love that comment Rico! :-) hugs jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/10/2019 12:23:00 PM
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Thank you... I needed that.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:13:00 AM
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I was lured back to post by the creation of a limerick contest but I am not active like I once was:-( hugs Jan xx
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/10/2019 8:15:00 AM
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Something about these limerick are so entertaining...Nice write...
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:12:00 AM
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thanks Arturo:-) :-) hugs jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/10/2019 5:52:00 AM
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Wouldn't be just the pirates arrrrrrr.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:07:00 AM
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lol you are right Tom:-) :-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/9/2019 9:52:00 PM
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Awesome write, Jan, good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:06:00 AM
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thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2019 8:43:00 PM
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Very cute, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2019 5:05:00 AM
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thanks Line, I think Tania knew I wouldn't resist coming back in to write for a limerick contest!:-) hugs jan xx

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