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A Picture Painted In My Rem Sleep

in my fantasies my deep REM sleep fantasies my lips caress your lips my fingers maneuver penetrate a deep massage distant sounds a trumpet plays with a cello & a bass a drum solo explodes a thunderous roar Pause amplifying your beauty the music we're in a moment still but for only a moment Slow Motion we walk hand-in-hand through the sand the ground warm breeze calm cloudy sand pushing in between my toes do you feel it too relaxing comforting aren't you glad you took off your shoes .....JP..2006.....

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Date: 7/27/2009 12:06:00 AM
beauty--charma
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Date: 7/12/2009 5:21:00 PM
That was beautiful. What a lucky woman.
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Date: 7/12/2009 7:22:00 AM
A kool write Jared, with a nice twist>>James
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Date: 7/11/2009 12:21:00 AM
Nice work, creative and clever...Raul
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