A Picture Painted In My Rem Sleep

in my fantasies
my deep
REM sleep 
fantasies
my lips caress
your lips
my fingers maneuver
penetrate
a deep massage
distant sounds
a trumpet plays
with a cello
& a bass
a drum solo explodes
a thunderous roar

Pause

amplifying your beauty
the music
we're in a moment
still but for only a moment

Slow Motion

we walk hand-in-hand
through the sand
the ground
warm
breeze calm
cloudy
sand pushing 
in between my toes
do you feel it too
relaxing
comforting
aren't you glad
you took off 
your shoes

.....JP..2006.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 12:06 AM
beauty--charma
Mills Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 5:21 PM
That was beautiful. What a lucky woman.
Fraser Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 7:22 AM
A kool write Jared, with a nice twist>>James
Moreno Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 12:21 AM
Nice work, creative and clever...Raul
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