Pat Adams Poet Limerick

A Pick Me Up

On workdays more often than not
I'll have a small energy shot
Too stay alert
It doesn't hurt
To get a little boost like I got!

But when off no such drinks I'll see
They are replaced most instantly
Quick as a snap
I'll take a nap
And that's just mighty fine by me!

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 20, 2018 at 11:27 AM Hey Pat, use this item when you need it. Nothing wrong with a nap. Have a nice day my friend. Pat Adams January 20, 2018 at 8:58 PM That's my motto!!!....Thanks for commenting Darlene!!...80)

Line Gauthier January 15, 2018 at 12:34 AM Always enjoy your writing, Pat. Pat Adams January 15, 2018 at 8:12 AM Aww!! Thank you Line, that is very sweet!!

Jill Spagnola January 14, 2018 at 7:21 PM I can Always use "A Pick Me UP!" Sage, real advice, a metaphorical shot or a nap :) Thanks Peace, Jill Pat Adams January 15, 2018 at 8:12 AM Thank you Jill. Peace back at Ya, and glad to meet you!!

Cheryl Hoffman January 14, 2018 at 7:11 PM I don't drink them either…just wait for second, third, and fourth winds to kick in instead! Good one Pat!~Che :) Pat Adams January 15, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thank you Cheryl! I don't think I have that many winds left in me!..........80)

Jan Allison January 14, 2018 at 5:31 PM lol Pat just a cuppa tea for me no energy drinks - the kids at school would have them and be on the ceiling lol:-) hugs jan xx Pat Adams January 15, 2018 at 8:08 AM They can have that effect! Thanks for the comment Jan!