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A Pick Me Up

On workdays more often than not I'll have a small energy shot Too stay alert It doesn't hurt To get a little boost like I got! But when off no such drinks I'll see They are replaced most instantly Quick as a snap I'll take a nap And that's just mighty fine by me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/20/2018 11:27:00 AM
Hey Pat, use this item when you need it. Nothing wrong with a nap. Have a nice day my friend.
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/20/2018 8:58:00 PM
That's my motto!!!....Thanks for commenting Darlene!!...80)
Date: 1/15/2018 12:34:00 AM
Always enjoy your writing, Pat.
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Date: 1/15/2018 8:12:00 AM
Aww!! Thank you Line, that is very sweet!!
Date: 1/14/2018 7:21:00 PM
I can Always use "A Pick Me UP!" Sage, real advice, a metaphorical shot or a nap :) Thanks Peace, Jill
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Date: 1/15/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Jill. Peace back at Ya, and glad to meet you!!
Date: 1/14/2018 7:11:00 PM
I don't drink them either…just wait for second, third, and fourth winds to kick in instead! Good one Pat!~Che :)
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Date: 1/15/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl! I don't think I have that many winds left in me!..........80)
Date: 1/14/2018 5:31:00 PM
lol Pat just a cuppa tea for me no energy drinks - the kids at school would have them and be on the ceiling lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2018 8:08:00 AM
They can have that effect! Thanks for the comment Jan!

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