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A Petal of Life

Drifts amidst the seashore floating a cherished memory Crumbled and close in creased palms crimson silk on weathered cheeks Scents of everlasting reaching out and coming back to get me Petals life holding on a heartbeat you're a part of me

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/9/2017 11:01:00 AM

Tim, this is so exquisitely beautiful, appealing to the senses and touching the heart! Lovely! Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 6/4/2017 11:54:00 PM

So much gentleness and love in your heart...~*

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 6/4/2017 7:25:00 PM

I love the images you conjure up in this poem Tim :) Amitiés

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2017 7:11:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White

Date: 6/3/2017 8:36:00 AM

Petals, each holds a memory - such a soft beautiful poem, my friend

Lin Lane

Date: 6/3/2017 7:40:00 AM

This write is as soft as the velvety petal of a rose, Tim, and just as sweet.

Sara Ella

Date: 6/3/2017 6:13:00 AM

A very heartfelt poem, Tim. The images are beautiful <3

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/3/2017 4:41:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. I'm sorry its been so long since I've turned to your page. This entry is poetry in the truest sense and expression. Yes it is. Yes too it is an entry that must be read out loud with emphasis. You are a marvelous writer. Thank you for sharing your work. Well done in its entirety. Enjoy the morning and day.