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Author's Notes:  "A Person's Worth and Measure," is a Rhymed Couplet I wrote and set in a mixed meter. I wrote this poem as a mirrored reflection of God's view of a person's worth and measure.  My attempt here is to show the interactive relationship between God and Man-Woman with the reassurance that "a person's azimuth," in this case, his or hers "direction in life" lies very much in God's hands. Now that I've said that, it would also be wise to factor a person's "free will" into God's ultimate celestial equation as one thinks about the relational sketch I've provided here on God's view of a person's worth and measure. God may have His plans, but we humans also possess our Free Will -- and the two do clash at times. Something indeed interesting to think about. Any attendant "Soul" issues are probably better left for another poem to consider and discuss. (Gary Bateman - June 6, 2015) (Rhymed Couplet)   

Categories:  allegory, change, god, inspiration, journey, metaphor, and spiritual.

 

A Person’s Worth and Measure A person’s life is sacred in God’s eyes, For we all know that God tells us no lies. God views a person’s worth and measure, As something grand and always to treasure. A person should fear not his or her measure, Rather strive always to find God’s pleasure. A person’s azimuth lies in God’s very hands, And only God knows one’s destiny and final plans. A person who does good works in this life, Is one who’s good and penitent before all strife. As a person’s life nears its final end days, God’s there to show him or her His holy ways. A person’s worth and measure mean so much; In God’s eyes such values always merit his touch! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, June 6, 2015 (Rhymed Couplet)

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Date: 9/9/2015 8:29:00 AM
It is always an amazing blessing to be reminded of God's grace and always a treasure to find golden little trinkets just like this write. Thank you for sharing Gary and it is a BIG (7) from me and a Fav.....Sharon
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Gary Bateman
Date: 9/9/2015 4:34:00 PM
Hello Sharon!! I knew you would end up FAV'ing one of my writes eventually (HA! HA!) with all you've so graciously reviewed thus far. And I'm very pleased you chose this one. I really enjoyed writing this one!! I've always enjoyed the rhymed couplet writes. They are such a marvelous poetic form to work with. Cheers and Best Wishes . . . Gary
Date: 6/26/2015 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful, we all have value to God, He game me the poem your true worth some time ago, its always good and refreshing to be reminded how much he loves us
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/26/2015 12:24:00 PM
Yes Absolutely Diane!! Thanks again for your visit and for your wonderful comments. Best Always, Gary
Date: 6/17/2015 1:01:00 AM
"A person’s azimuth lies in God’s very hands" This line is so true. Again, wonderfull couplet Mr. Gary Bateman. cheers!!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/17/2015 1:27:00 PM
Thanks Kunal for your read here. I liked putting this couplet together. It does indeed have a powerful message. (Keep writing and developing your poetry; I will try to drop by from time to time for some reads. And continued best of luck to you too!!) Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 6/13/2015 9:58:00 PM
Hi G! A very beautifully written poem my dear friend Gary.Very inspiring and uplifting beautiful message delivered in brilliant couplets I truly enjoyed this excellent piece G!A 7 +!Golden pen!Sending my love to you and Ingrid,all the best to you always:)Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light! God bless you always!:)D.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/14/2015 9:18:00 AM
Hello "D" My Dear Friend!! Thanks for your most wonderful comment and for the 7+!! Glad you liked this rhymed couplet. Sending you best wishes always from us!! (I have to drop by and see you latest poem. I've been swamped here of late!!) Best Always, Gary
Date: 6/9/2015 3:36:00 PM
Quite true; beautifully penned.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/9/2015 5:00:00 PM
Thanks ML!! Glad you like this rhymed couplet. I enjoyed putting this one together. Best Always, Gary
Date: 6/8/2015 8:01:00 PM
Very inspiring, uplifting and spiritual poem my friend. Reminds us that God has already measured mankind's worth and found it magnificent--if not hr'd not chosen a man to be his Son. Smooth and a joy to read. A7
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Date: 6/9/2015 4:54:00 AM
Thanks Robert!! Always great to hear from you and to receive your most gracious comments. I certainly agree with your words above. I enjoyed writing this particular couplet with its positive message. Thanks for the "7"!! (I will drop by check out your latest works too.) Check out my New Blog advertising my new book. Any comment you wish to add to it would be greatly appreciated since you know well my book by now. I've started working now toward my second planned book. More on that later . . . . Best Always, Gary
Date: 6/8/2015 1:40:00 AM
Gary, I love your lines! inspiring and uplifting... Indeed, I totally agree...! Stay blessed Gary! ~olive eloisa :D!
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:07:00 AM
Hello Olive Eloisa!! I'm glad you liked this couplet. I will be by later to check out your latest works. I always appreciate you comments and visits. Stay Blessed as well -- and Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 6/6/2015 10:30:00 PM
A well-contemplated piece, Gary. Indeed God deemed all men worthy of His love and His Son's life. We therefore strive, human that we are, to give Him pleasure. a worthy 7. Warm regards to Ingrid!
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Date: 6/7/2015 7:40:00 AM
Hello Kim!! Always my pleasure to hear from you my precious fellow colleague and friend!! I'm glad you liked this couplet. I like very much how it turned out, and the power of its very positive message. And thanks for the "7" rating too!! I will pass your warm regards to Ingrid. And our continued best wishes to YOU!! Keep writing and doing all of the marvelous work you're doing!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 6/6/2015 7:18:00 PM
Great piece Gary. God will lead the way.
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Date: 6/7/2015 7:48:00 AM
Hello Cupids Arrow!! Thanks for your read and review -- and most assuredly I agree with you that "God will lead the way." (I might have had a bit of His Influence when pondering this theme and put the words on paper.) Best Always, Gary

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