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A Perfect Storm

Love’s tempestuous when everything aligns, and so it was the day we met on a sandy beach in the late spring - a perfect storm I cannot forget! I knew you’d been swimming in the sea when you sauntered past me dripping wet. Something wild your glances brewed in me - a perfect storm I cannot forget! Good fortune! The beach had emptied fast when you approached me before sunset. My heart - crashing waves! There came at last a perfect storm I cannot forget! Just we two, the beach, and twilight’s glow. What passion was unleashed when I let you kiss my lips! All those years ago - a perfect storm I cannot forget.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/3/2018 1:19:00 PM
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A wild and tempestous sort of write Andrea If I didn't know you better...Oh I don't know you better, better not I suppose not that I mean anything other than enjoyed the write tonight.'
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2017 3:16:00 AM
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Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/7/2017 12:58:00 AM
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Love this very romantic and serendipitous piece, Andrea - charming and fun! My kind of evening, too! Congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-) <3
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James Inman
Date: 10/7/2017 12:03:00 AM
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I like this a lot Andrea. I don't think Ive tried this form. It looks interesting.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/6/2017 9:47:00 PM
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Congrats in placing in Craig's contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/6/2017 6:53:00 PM
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Andrea, congratulations on your win in Craig's contest with this wonderful write !
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Joseph May
Date: 10/6/2017 3:16:00 PM
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Dropping back with my Congrats!
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/6/2017 4:36:00 AM
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I enjoyed reading this Andrea, beautifully written Kyrielle, GL in contest. :))
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Jennifer Walker
Date: 10/5/2017 8:40:00 PM
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Romantic and beautifully penned.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/5/2017 7:44:00 AM
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Nice take on the contest prompt, Andrea. I have never seen this form, have to go look it up. Good luck in the contest.
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Becca Teagan
Date: 10/4/2017 9:33:00 PM
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wow, Andrea! This is awesome! I'm not familiar with the form, but I love the repetition. I think you did a great job.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2017 9:15:00 PM
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A lovely kyrielle, my friend!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/4/2017 6:25:00 PM
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Love the write and the form Andrea... Beautifully penned
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 5:44:00 PM
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how romantic Andrea - a vast improvement on what you originally posted lol! Good luck in the contest:-):-) hugs Jan xx
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/4/2017 4:10:00 PM
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that storm must be one fiery sensation...can you tell me how i could have a sample of this thrilling moment, andie?... love it!..huggs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/4/2017 5:23:00 PM
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only in my dreams, sweetie!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/4/2017 2:57:00 PM
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- Romantic waves and stormy kisses, Andrea ... of course you will never forget :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2017 1:41:00 PM
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A romantic storm, so well depicted--best for a win Andrea!
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Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 10/4/2017 1:18:00 PM
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How romantic! Nice poem Andrea as always!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/4/2017 12:29:00 PM
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How romantic and memorial! GREAT WRITE, AMANDA!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 11:30:00 AM
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Lol
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