A Perfect Rhyme

The silent snow fell
Throughout the night
Taking the world
And turning it white
I sat at my window 
Transfixed by the sight
And wondered
What the hell am I doing up at this hour?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Macmillan Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 8:28 PM
Thumbs waaaaaaaaaaay up! (said at 11:30 pm when I've been up since 6 am) And any writer (poetry or otherwise) would say this one is a keeper. Cheers, Cyndi
Breidenthal Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Your poem was very cute. Nice job!
Francis Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 10:46 AM
LOL not the end I expected! good one
Flanders Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Ha! Ha! nice one...cheers.
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