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A Perfect Rhyme

The silent snow fell Throughout the night Taking the world And turning it white I sat at my window Transfixed by the sight And wondered What the hell am I doing up at this hour?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/27/2011 8:28:00 PM
Thumbs waaaaaaaaaaay up! (said at 11:30 pm when I've been up since 6 am) And any writer (poetry or otherwise) would say this one is a keeper. Cheers, Cyndi
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Date: 5/27/2011 1:06:00 PM
Your poem was very cute. Nice job!
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Date: 5/27/2011 10:46:00 AM
LOL not the end I expected! good one
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Date: 5/27/2011 10:39:00 AM
Ha! Ha! nice one...cheers.
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