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May be an image of owl and text that says 'MYSTICAL DREAMS FORTWO FOR TWO'

Never had I heard a flutter so clear! nor more distinct than the settle of midnight wings; Soft gray wings spreading, fanning coming to gentle fold, soon to follow, a nightingale's song, lilting the air. Such a blessed union is rare! Light and dark shadows tranquilly sharing space One perfect moment seemingly forgiving, as gentle as the harmonious embrace, of bird and sky ! Never have I felt so powerful against the night ! no more indefinite than a feather in the wind. My heart beating slow as time comes to a standstill before the soft caress of a nightingale in flight! Chiaroscuro moments on the soul oh how I wish that I had wings to fly and meet him in mid air.... never had I heard a flutter so clear nor a song so very dear to me... The End. A creation by Joe and Mystic I give thanks to the man who began this venture and gave me a chance to fly with it lol

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Date: 7/11/2025 5:54:00 PM
A lovely collaboration, well done both… Beryl
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Date: 7/11/2025 6:49:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem Beryl, hope you have been keeping well :)
Date: 7/11/2025 3:38:00 PM
Ethereal and sweet. Love the imagery here. You both did a great job. Thanks for the visit, dear.
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Date: 7/11/2025 6:49:00 PM
So good to hear from you dear Eileen, I always enjoyed your poems, :)
Date: 7/11/2025 10:06:00 AM
Both poems are nice.
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Date: 7/11/2025 10:47:00 AM
I think they mesh well together Jay, Joe was the inspiration for this !
Date: 7/11/2025 8:25:00 AM
"oh how I wish that I had wings to fly and meet him in mid air.... never had I heard a flutter so clear nor a song so very dear to me..." -- Wow! So beautiful! I am in utter awe. Great poetry! Blessings my friend. The needed dimensions you have added to this work, are dazzling. Spiritually ascending. Blessings. Thank you.
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Date: 7/11/2025 10:47:00 AM
what can I say you inspired me this morning lol, I always loved nightingales ands I love the song by Rod Stewart about a nightingale singing. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-VLxRU_aWE&list=RDD-VLxRU_aWE&start_radio=1

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