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A Perfect Life

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Inspired by, but not entered in, Mystic Rose Rose’ If I Were Your Love Poetry Contest

If I were your love and you, mine, a perfect life would come to mind, a song of love so true and fine! If I were your love and you, mine. My heart to you I would consign! We’d build a life to last and bind! If I were your love and you, mine, a perfect life would come to mind.

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/21/2023 12:18:00 AM

I really get it..The lyrics hit it.' Love true, mine and mind heart And soul great thoughts combined.' Well done Linda-Alice

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 7:09:00 AM

Thanks Joe! I always appreciate your comments on my poems. :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/5/2023 6:25:00 PM

Sounds like would be a hit tune. Gorgeous! No kidding Pangie

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/5/2023 7:08:00 PM

I hadn't thought of that Pangie, but as I re-read it now, hmmmm. Good to see you out and about. I'll catchup with you later. Thanks for stopping by with your thoughtful comments. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/4/2023 6:09:00 PM

"a song of love true and fine" Indeed!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/4/2023 6:38:00 PM

Is there such a thing my friend Daniel? Thanks for visiting with your supportive words. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 5/4/2023 4:21:00 PM

Well-written Triolet, Linda. Your ideas on love match mine. :-) Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/4/2023 4:49:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Love is a fine emotion. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2023 9:27:00 AM

- Beautifully written ... imagine if everything was perfect in life, Linda :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/4/2023 12:05:00 PM

I can only imagine Anne-Lise. Reality is that there is no 'perfect'. We can get only as nearly perfect as we can. :) Thank you for enjoying and dreaming with me. :)

Lin Lane

Date: 5/4/2023 6:55:00 AM

Lovingly rendered words, Linda. Sometimes dreams come true when we dream of a fairytale life. Sweet thoughts.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2023 7:16:00 AM

It's the view of a dreamer, Linda, the best kind.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/4/2023 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Lin. A simplistic view, to be sure, but a pleasant one. :)