Linda Alice Fowler Poet Triolet

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Inspired by, but not entered in, Mystic Rose Rose’ If I Were Your Love Poetry Contest

A Perfect Life

If I were your love and you, mine,
a perfect life would come to mind,
a song of love so true and fine!
If I were your love and you, mine.
My heart to you I would consign!
We’d build a life to last and bind!
If I were your love and you, mine,
a perfect life would come to mind.

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Joe Maverick May 21, 2023 at 12:18 AM I really get it..The lyrics hit it.' Love true, mine and mind heart And soul great thoughts combined.' Well done Linda-Alice Linda Alice Fowler May 25, 2023 at 7:09 AM Thanks Joe! I always appreciate your comments on my poems. :)

Panagiota Romios May 5, 2023 at 6:25 PM Sounds like would be a hit tune. Gorgeous! No kidding Pangie Linda Alice Fowler May 5, 2023 at 7:08 PM I hadn't thought of that Pangie, but as I re-read it now, hmmmm. Good to see you out and about. I'll catchup with you later. Thanks for stopping by with your thoughtful comments. :)

Daniel Turner May 4, 2023 at 6:09 PM "a song of love true and fine" Indeed! Linda Alice Fowler May 4, 2023 at 6:38 PM Is there such a thing my friend Daniel? Thanks for visiting with your supportive words. :)

Bill Baker May 4, 2023 at 4:21 PM Well-written Triolet, Linda. Your ideas on love match mine. :-) Bill Linda Alice Fowler May 4, 2023 at 4:49 PM Thank you my friend. Love is a fine emotion. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2023 at 9:27 AM - Beautifully written ... imagine if everything was perfect in life, Linda :) - hugs Linda Alice Fowler May 4, 2023 at 12:05 PM I can only imagine Anne-Lise. Reality is that there is no 'perfect'. We can get only as nearly perfect as we can. :) Thank you for enjoying and dreaming with me. :)

Lin Lane May 4, 2023 at 6:55 AM Lovingly rendered words, Linda. Sometimes dreams come true when we dream of a fairytale life. Sweet thoughts. Lin Lane May 4, 2023 at 7:16 AM It's the view of a dreamer, Linda, the best kind. Linda Alice Fowler May 4, 2023 at 7:00 AM Thanks Lin. A simplistic view, to be sure, but a pleasant one. :)