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Betrayal has left a hole in your heart that yesterday's memories cannot fill. And anxiety's tearing you apart as the trickling tears continue to spill. Depression creates a self-pity web that numbs pain, motivating you to stay. And the tides of worry refuse to ebb until you accept hope's not far away. When a forever promise is broken, there is no way one can ever fix it. For trust will question every word spoken, unsure if both hearts are a perfect fit. Though you think your pain will never abate, you'll eventually recuperate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/3/2018 2:01:00 PM
Hello Emile, I just read this poem. In a marriage there is trust,a man and wife being faithful to each other,is good until one partner breaks the trust and cheats. I will never know why because my husband is dead.Trust is better between two people not one. have a nice day my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/4/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/27/2018 12:13:00 AM
Precisely penned. I admire.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/27/2018 6:55:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Date: 6/25/2018 9:35:00 PM
Nothing can ever replace Trust.. nothing!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/26/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/25/2018 2:02:00 PM
Good one, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/25/2018 11:44:00 AM
For trust means more than merely words spoken it’s what shapes hearts...into a perfect fit. So true!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2018 3:25:00 PM
So happy to “see” you smile, my friend! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Kim, you always manage to bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

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