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A perfect answer

"Who are you to enter my room?", her aunt's screams terrified the 10 years old's cold feet. She ran away from there while her aunt's question reverberated in her tender mind. Years later the question got its answer when the girl's name was printed on the cover page of a book.

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Date: 11/27/2019 3:10:00 PM
You're a little too mean... LOL
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Date: 11/18/2019 11:19:00 AM
Woah so you mean the girl grew up to be a famous celeb?? Wow beyond expectations eh. You wrote it a fine dramatic turn of events. Great poem. Pls do comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 11/6/2019 7:38:00 AM
- An excellent answer, Swetha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2019 7:02:00 AM
Destiny's fulfillment so well expressed dear, Swetha!
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Date: 11/1/2019 9:14:00 AM
Wonderful slice of reality here.
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Date: 10/30/2019 6:03:00 PM
That answer is the most satisfying, isn't it?
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Date: 10/29/2019 7:33:00 AM
Oh nicely done. So There Auntie! Hope the child wasn't permanently scarred by her verbal abuse. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/28/2019 11:25:00 AM
I feel so good for the little girl...you gave her a voice..brilliantly depicted, Swetha.
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Date: 10/28/2019 9:50:00 AM
Oh that is powerful! Relishing this. :))) xomo!
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Date: 10/28/2019 9:06:00 AM
And now that 10-year old girl/published author can adopt the Cheshire Cat's friendly grin, asking Alice (in Wonderland): "Who are you?" (If you've never seen that delightful scene from the movie, try it out.). Intriguing poem, Swetha! Smiles, Gershon
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/29/2019 5:19:00 AM
Woah!!! To imagine the little girl like that is like WOW!! LOL!! I'm now wondering what the response of the aunt could be!!!