Swetha Vangaveti Poet Free verse

A Perfect Answer

"Who are you to enter my room?", her aunt's screams terrified the 10 years old's cold feet. 

She ran away from there while her aunt's question reverberated in her tender mind. 

Years later the question got its answer when the girl's name was printed on the cover page of a book.

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Pashang Salehi November 27, 2019 at 3:10 PM You're a little too mean... LOL

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri November 18, 2019 at 11:19 AM Woah so you mean the girl grew up to be a famous celeb?? Wow beyond expectations eh. You wrote it a fine dramatic turn of events. Great poem. Pls do comment my newest poem too.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2019 at 7:38 AM - An excellent answer, Swetha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 6, 2019 at 7:02 AM Destiny's fulfillment so well expressed dear, Swetha!

Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2019 at 9:14 AM Wonderful slice of reality here.

Michelle Faulkner October 30, 2019 at 6:03 PM That answer is the most satisfying, isn't it?

Judy Ball October 29, 2019 at 7:33 AM Oh nicely done. So There Auntie! Hope the child wasn't permanently scarred by her verbal abuse. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit October 28, 2019 at 11:25 AM I feel so good for the little girl...you gave her a voice..brilliantly depicted, Swetha.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 28, 2019 at 9:50 AM Oh that is powerful! Relishing this. :))) xomo!

Gershon Wolf October 28, 2019 at 9:06 AM And now that 10-year old girl/published author can adopt the Cheshire Cat's friendly grin, asking Alice (in Wonderland): "Who are you?" (If you've never seen that delightful scene from the movie, try it out.). Intriguing poem, Swetha! Smiles, Gershon Swetha Vangaveti October 29, 2019 at 5:19 AM Woah!!! To imagine the little girl like that is like WOW!! LOL!! I'm now wondering what the response of the aunt could be!!!