A Pebble

A pebble I feel like a pebble in a big waterfalls everything is crashing down Can someone help me I can barely see everything around me is wrong Its pounding crashing whirling spinning unruly it never stops I wish I could be a big mighty stone I want to do big stone stuff But im just a pebble smashed and disheveled A pebble that is never a rock

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 6:36:00 AM

Thanks Dean... glad you like my comment

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/16/2016 10:39:00 PM

Dean, Many of your poems are perfect and beautiful. Way different than mine. you are an awesome poet. LINDA

Dean Mobley
Date: 2/8/2016 11:07:00 AM

Thank you. Tell me, I need the truth. I think some of my poems are amazingly good. But I just can't tell. I feel like a primitive beginner. Do they read like beautiful art....what are they..??? Tell me they are beautiful...did they make you cry?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 4:40:00 AM

Hello, Dean WOW, that's a very sad feeling. Can you imagine being a large rock under a waterfall. The water splashing in every wrong way, while the pebble gets the full impact of life, becoming cleansed during it's roughest time.... What I am Trying To say... "Oh Look I found A Lovely Pebble, I'm putting it in my pocket and taking it home." Love LINDA

Dean Mobley
Date: 2/7/2016 6:34:00 AM

Thank you for that. I did imagine that very same story line. I want to be a beautiful pebble. One that someone would love. I see what I can do. ??