Dean Mobley Poet ABC

A Pebble

A pebble 


I feel like a pebble in 
a big waterfalls
everything is
crashing down

Can someone help me
I can barely see 
everything around me 
is wrong 

Its pounding crashing whirling spinning 
unruly it never stops

I wish I could be 
a big mighty stone
I want to do big stone stuff

But im just a pebble 
smashed and  disheveled

A pebble that is never a rock

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Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 6:36 AM Thanks Dean... glad you like my comment Poet Destroyer A February 16, 2016 at 10:39 PM Dean, Many of your poems are perfect and beautiful. Way different than mine. you are an awesome poet. LINDA Dean Mobley February 8, 2016 at 11:07 AM Thank you. Tell me, I need the truth. I think some of my poems are amazingly good. But I just can't tell. I feel like a primitive beginner. Do they read like beautiful art....what are they..??? Tell me they are beautiful...did they make you cry?

Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 4:40 AM Hello, Dean WOW, that's a very sad feeling. Can you imagine being a large rock under a waterfall. The water splashing in every wrong way, while the pebble gets the full impact of life, becoming cleansed during it's roughest time.... What I am Trying To say... "Oh Look I found A Lovely Pebble, I'm putting it in my pocket and taking it home." Love LINDA Dean Mobley February 7, 2016 at 6:34 AM Thank you for that. I did imagine that very same story line. I want to be a beautiful pebble. One that someone would love. I see what I can do. ??