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A Patio-Like Place

Behind my building, there’s a spot, A patio-like place, With iron benches, tables, too - A lovely outdoor space. With flow’ring bushes all around, It’s someplace nice to sit, Although on sunny days, I’m sure That I would sweat a bit. It’s open to the tenants; From the basement, there’s a door. The strangest thing is that I haven’t Been out here before. I found it quite by accident, But learned that it’s been here For two-plus years and rarely used; The reason why’s not clear. It doesn’t have the river’s pull, But I can sit outside And read or write by taking Just an elevator ride.

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Date: 6/10/2024 7:09:00 PM
I'm with you on this. A quiet, secret place can be very calming. I enjoy this write.
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Date: 6/10/2024 1:25:00 PM
My local library has a walled-in garden, but that’s open to the sky, with benches and tables. I never saw anyone in there, but imagine how cozy it would be on a windy day. When I inquired, I was told it is for staff.
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