A Passionate Encounter

Or
An Overnight Romance.

We met by chance in a shopping mall,
Could see you were “special,” the best of all.
I made my advances, which rang your bell,
That you liked me too, was easy to tell.

I said but little, as we walked round and about,
So took you home, for I had nary a doubt,
That you were ideal for an intimate tete a tete,
Being totally convinced our meeting was fate.

I sat on the couch, with you snuggled up tight,
That my arms now held you, seemed so right.
When it grew late, I suggested we share a bed:
With no objection from you, we went ahead.
	
I laid you down gently, holding you tightly,
And this passionate moment, seemed rightly,
One we should follow, for we thought it okay!
So every night, I cuddle up to my new duvet!

Rhymer.  November 30th, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 30, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Loved the hook! Love the word duvet! enjoyed ~ john
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December 1, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Thanks John. I'll bet quite a few let their minds wander down a different path and ending - Lol! That was my intention! Have a great day. Ciao Denis.
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November 30, 2016 at 5:49 PM
That was funny, loved the gotcha ending. Perfectly done my friend
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December 1, 2016 at 6:25 AM
Thanks Chris, glad you enjoyed it. Wonder how many were led down the garden path? Lol! Ciao Denis.
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