A Passion For You-A Collaboration With Jimmy Anderson

The nights don't seem as long these days
For at your picture I lovingly gaze
You have me completely under your spell
You have my heart and soul as well!

Wish I could touch you all the time
Cos' you're the reason for my rhyme
There's nothing that I wouldn't do
I'll prove my utter passion for you!

True passion has no fear
So there's nothing I wouldn't do
Just wait less than a year
And we'll explore all the taboo!

I will be all you desire
And take your body heavenly places
Our sexes will meld with fire
And leave us smokin' like aces!

Baby just hold on for a little while
For my sincere words are true
I'll emotionally make your heart smile
And eternally prove my passion for you!




*note:I wrote the first two stanzas and Jimmy wrote the last three(great job  Jimmy!!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/16/2011 9:38:00 AM
"Two heads are better than one". That old cliche holds true for this splendid presentation with great descriptiveness and rhyming. I have sent you soup mail.
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Date: 1/15/2011 12:54:00 PM
Nicely done you two. I feel the passion. Joe
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