Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

A Party Called Life

Bouncing off Sara Kendrick’s List:

The tap show on the kitchen floor.
Busy, wasn’t keeping score.
For the error to expunge.
Daughter’s friend, I handed a sponge.

A going away party - fun!
Ice cream sundaes, not in the sun.
Not a great idea indoors.
Kids started a food flight - a war.

The bedroom door knocked on and down.
My son must fix - send in the clowns.
My husband knocks later - it falls.
Fix failed with huge nails through the wall.

11/29/2021
All True!

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Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2021 at 8:38 AM What a fun/cute write. Guess you are the party house. Ice cream sundaes are for me. When is the next party??? Have a blessed day writing away with an ice cream sundae................

Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2021 at 9:23 PM What a great list. "The bedroom door knocked on and down. My son must fix - send in the clowns." So much fun to read!

Bill Baker November 30, 2021 at 4:38 PM A funny day ....afterwards. Fun poem to read Kim, thanks for sharing your unique day in the party of life. :-) a poet friend, Bill Kim Rodrigues November 30, 2021 at 5:22 PM Thanks, Bill!

Judy Ball November 30, 2021 at 8:25 AM Oohoohoo! What a party. Good you could take it in good humor. I think I would have had a cow. A fun read Kim. God Bless, JB Kim Rodrigues November 30, 2021 at 9:54 AM Three separate incidents thankfully! First one was really humorous. I have run into this now grown up lady with kids of her own.

Sara Kendrick November 30, 2021 at 5:46 AM I enjoyed reading this one. It probably wasn't funny at the time but later you could laugh about it. I am glad that you were able to write one after reading my poem. It is good that I inspired you to tell about your life happening. Sara Kim Rodrigues November 30, 2021 at 6:25 AM Especially the ice cream party. There was so much more to that one but I shall keep that (now) humorous moment light. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the inspiration!

Demetrios Trifiatis November 30, 2021 at 2:15 AM Reality is displayed before our eyes in a vivid poetic way! Well done, dearest Kim. Blessings Kim Rodrigues November 30, 2021 at 6:25 AM Thank you, sweet Demetrios! Thinking of you often and praying for your recovery <3

Unseeking Seeker November 29, 2021 at 8:35 PM Delightful! Join the celebration! Kim Rodrigues November 30, 2021 at 6:25 AM (Smiles) :)

Gershon Wolf November 29, 2021 at 8:24 PM Sounds like a 'spoonful of sugar will help the medicine go down.' ~ Delightful Ways Kim Rodrigues November 30, 2021 at 6:26 AM Eventually we can smile about these things…laugh even! God bless you xx

Vijay Pandit November 29, 2021 at 2:02 PM Kids will do it every time. But they had a lot of fun--and isn't that the sweet purpose! Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2021 at 2:10 PM My husband started to get mad about the door. I told him we will laugh at this one day ;)

Joseph P. DiMino November 29, 2021 at 12:10 PM A regular circus! You have got to love it! Great poetry! Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2021 at 2:09 PM Thanks, Joe :)

Victor Buhagiar November 29, 2021 at 11:04 AM Grown up kids having fun? Hugs. Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2021 at 2:09 PM All kids…lol

Jenna Logan November 29, 2021 at 9:49 AM Oh my goodness, Kim! Sounds like a madhouse...all on the same day? Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2021 at 10:42 AM LOL…no!