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A Party Called Life

Bouncing off Sara Kendrick’s List: The tap show on the kitchen floor. Busy, wasn’t keeping score. For the error to expunge. Daughter’s friend, I handed a sponge. A going away party - fun! Ice cream sundaes, not in the sun. Not a great idea indoors. Kids started a food flight - a war. The bedroom door knocked on and down. My son must fix - send in the clowns. My husband knocks later - it falls. Fix failed with huge nails through the wall. 11/29/2021 All True!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/11/2021 8:38:00 AM

What a fun/cute write. Guess you are the party house. Ice cream sundaes are for me. When is the next party??? Have a blessed day writing away with an ice cream sundae................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/30/2021 9:23:00 PM

What a great list. "The bedroom door knocked on and down. My son must fix - send in the clowns." So much fun to read!

Bill Baker

Date: 11/30/2021 4:38:00 PM

A funny day ....afterwards. Fun poem to read Kim, thanks for sharing your unique day in the party of life. :-) a poet friend, Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2021 5:22:00 PM

Thanks, Bill!

Judy Ball

Date: 11/30/2021 8:25:00 AM

Oohoohoo! What a party. Good you could take it in good humor. I think I would have had a cow. A fun read Kim. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2021 9:54:00 AM

Three separate incidents thankfully! First one was really humorous. I have run into this now grown up lady with kids of her own.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2021 5:46:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. It probably wasn't funny at the time but later you could laugh about it. I am glad that you were able to write one after reading my poem. It is good that I inspired you to tell about your life happening. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2021 6:25:00 AM

Especially the ice cream party. There was so much more to that one but I shall keep that (now) humorous moment light. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the inspiration!