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A Parallel Universe

Imagine if there was a parallel universe Just a wee bit ahead in time To allow us to avoid all our mistakes A civilization most perfect in kind How incredibly amazing that would be A real chance to get things right It would surely be possible to end all wars To eliminate our desire to fight Finally all over this great planet Earth Peace and brotherhood would exist No hunger no famine no widespread disease Like Utopia rising from the mist I'd surely be lost if I couldn't imagine So call me a dreamer if you must Until proven beyond a shadow of a doubt In a better future, I will trust Imagine if there was a parallel universe Where all of our dreams came true Till my very last breath, I'll keep hope alive For a world with a sky ever blue!

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Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 9:50:00 PM

You have my imagination running wild!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/7/2018 4:52:00 AM

Gotta let your mind run wild... it's amazing where it will take you!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/6/2018 10:39:00 AM

Yeah, except I probably wouldn't be here, mum was 16 when she had me, oops! ;p xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/6/2018 2:33:00 PM

Well, take it from me... trying growing up for a couple of days!!! Realized that certainly wasn't for me... haven't looked back since!!! YEE HAW XOX

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/6/2018 12:12:00 PM

More that I've yet to hear a convincing argument for growing up ;)

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/6/2018 11:10:00 AM

YIKES! A teenage Momma! Is that why you're so young at heart??? XOX

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/6/2018 5:35:00 AM

Such a lovely poem this is, full of hope, It s funny that I have been studying universe from last whole year and scientists now think that there is a chance that such a universe exist, with every decision we take, another parallel iniverse is created in which we might have taken the decision in other way, perhaps we will not be alive to know whether this is only a theory or such a thing do exist, good luck and have a nice day

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/6/2018 5:45:00 AM

Good morning my friend!!! I honestly can't believe there aren't other inhabited planets out there! How ridiculous to even imagine we are the ONLY one! Just my thoughts on this very intriguing subject... perhaps one day! Cheers!