Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- A One Way Ticket -

Hills come alive with sweet sounds of birds whistling tunes
Filled with harmonious peace, you sail within time
Gentle whispering winds through branches of trees call

When you dare to take the first step forward
Everything feels so easy embracing such beauty 
Mixing voices of nature talk deeply flowering 

Thrown into the unknown life is truly magical
A universe inside feelings explode in one gift
The soul eclipsing delight warmed with sunshine rays

Like a virgin being on guard of the tiger claws, lions, bears and snakes
Only when your starlight kisses clouds evaporate 
Time continues and the butterfly waltzes freely once more

Crossing paths in this journey new beginnings grow
Small wild strawberries threaded upon a stem beg to taste
Opening one gateway within thoughts 

Setting sail into another world beyond 
With you salt of the ocean waves rise and fall
Upon rocks kissing pillar of strength

A cool breeze says goodbye upon your cheek
Loving spices land this boat on paradise sands where gold sparkles warm beams
When we meet at Heaven's gate batting lashes close entering a doorway into a dream 





Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  05.09.2015 
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Angeline Haikutwinkle January 25, 2017 at 11:07 AM Given a 7, complimenting the style and enchanting phrases, I see Liam's footprints all over the place.

Phyllis Babcock October 7, 2015 at 11:57 AM Feel the love and the love of nature on this wonderful poem. Awesome. love pyl Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2015 at 2:31 PM - Dear Phyllis, always a pleasure to share with good friends - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper September 25, 2015 at 7:08 PM So very beautiful!!!! Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2015 at 2:31 PM - Thank you, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft September 19, 2015 at 4:14 AM Very good and very lovely x Wendy Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2015 at 1:14 PM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Micheals September 16, 2015 at 2:53 PM Love it! Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2015 at 2:54 PM - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sharon Gulley September 15, 2015 at 11:05 AM Good morning Anne Lise and Liam, I so love this beautiful write. Congrats on POD to you both. I love how the imagery just brings you along on such a wonderful journey of love and nature.... Sharon Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2015 at 11:38 AM - Sharon, always enjoyable with positive feedback and beautiful congrats :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neva Romaine September 14, 2015 at 2:35 PM Hey Anne Lise and Limam, A very hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTW!! Such a beautiful, sweet piece on love and intimacy back dropped in the beauty and imagery of Nature. Great expression and well deserving! Be Blessed, Neva Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2015 at 11:37 AM - Always enjoyable with positive feedback and beautiful congrats, Neva :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 13, 2015 at 5:45 PM congrats on poem of the week so good to read this again:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2015 at 3:12 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter September 13, 2015 at 2:40 PM Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!Congratulations to you both on POTW!A very beautiful love poem collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)You both deserve it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2015 at 2:53 PM - Always enjoyable with positive feedback and beautiful congrats, Dorian :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid September 13, 2015 at 1:54 PM also i would like to thank you all for the heartfelt wonderful comments wishing you all a blessed day

Liam Mcdaid September 13, 2015 at 1:52 PM congratulations anne lise your words shone the gold in this piece smiling wishing you a blessed beautiful day Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2015 at 2:00 PM - I share this pleasure with you, my friend Liam ..... without you .... it would be a bad poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez September 13, 2015 at 12:54 PM Back to congratulate you both for your POTW, Anne and Liam! hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2015 at 1:15 PM - Thanks Kim, you're always welcome back - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. September 13, 2015 at 10:55 AM Anne- Lise and Liam, congratulations on having this piece selected as the poem of the week:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2015 at 1:13 PM - P.o.t.w. almost like birthday and Christmas Eve in one day :) - Thanks Alexis and specially thanks to Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman September 13, 2015 at 9:41 AM Hello Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! My earlier comments on this poem on Sept 6th are in totally the same with my feelings today on the wonderfully powerful message of this poem and its descriptive imagery. Congratulations on POTW!! Very-Well Done!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2015 at 1:09 PM - Dear Gary, this was great :) - really glad that this was chosen as the POTW - Thanks to you and specially thanks to Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 10, 2015 at 12:38 AM Anne Lise and Liam, excellent collab from both of you...!! keep it 'em coming.. =`)~Olive Eloisa Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2015 at 3:14 AM - Olive, thanks from both Liam and me for enjoyable visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen September 8, 2015 at 12:55 PM What a beautiful collab, I love how it was constructed... Great job both.......A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2015 at 4:14 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Peranteau September 8, 2015 at 9:13 AM Zzzz hot collaboration Anne Lise! If there is a different story here than what I'm reading; 'my bad'...*smiles* I simply loved it....and to mine faves if'n ya don't mind! Have a wonderful week....much love, james Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2015 at 11:38 AM - A pleasure and honor that you will "fav" our poem, James - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam September 8, 2015 at 8:04 AM Another beautiful collaboration. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2015 at 11:40 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, without readers my poems would "die" - Always nice to see you, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez September 7, 2015 at 4:23 AM Lovely and romantic, your collab is more fluidthan ever. Hugs to you both, Liam and Anne! Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2015 at 8:02 AM - Kim , thank you for your visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid September 6, 2015 at 2:45 PM thank you everyone for the deeply warm beautiful touching comments wishing you all a great week ahead with blessings Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2015 at 8:05 AM - Jepp :)

Liam Mcdaid September 6, 2015 at 2:43 PM your pen anne lise sparkled thank you kindly for sharing pens truly a pleasure as always wishing you a blessed beautiful day Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2015 at 7:59 AM - Thank the same to you my friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick September 6, 2015 at 12:52 PM You are getting very good at the collaborative efforts..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2015 at 1:56 PM - Sara, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen September 6, 2015 at 12:21 PM The flow of your wonderful write goes smoothly within the heart of the readers.... It depicted vivid imagery that brought your piece to life. I inhale its scent, it intoxicates me.....love always........A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2015 at 1:55 PM - Beautiful words, warms my heart - thank you, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman September 6, 2015 at 6:55 AM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! A most outstanding free verse adventure here for sure with the marvelous imagery and sublimely descriptive message of "A One Way Ticket." I can sum up your co-write here in one definitive word: "Brilliant." This one's a "7" and going my Book of FAVs!! Congratulations of a most wondrously-conceived write!! Cheers and Best, Gary Gary Bateman September 6, 2015 at 7:26 AM Please always continue writing Dear Anne-Lise!! You have the Golden Pen of an Angel!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2015 at 7:06 AM - I love this "Book of Fav" :))) - thank you my good friend Gary, always enjoyable with positive and lovely comments ...... your words mean a lot to me - it gives me pleasure to continue writing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 6, 2015 at 5:56 AM soulful write that uplifts, dear anne.. another beautiful collab as i wish you sunday's best!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2015 at 7:07 AM - Always a pleasure to share with good friends - thank you, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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