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A One-Write Stand

I thought I had the element of surprise
 on my side, as I looked longingly in her eyes
    Tempted to reveal the whole spiel
She spoke with unequivocated zeal
...elegant fingers fondled a wineglass stem
Knowing the control she had on men
  Furtive grin as she relished her hold on them...

Sparring in Stained-wood and polished brass arenas
 Lighten by neon signs, three stools between us
Asking as I wrote, what words I conjured
 Her initial inquiry left me feeling honored
But as fast as the fascination manifested
 a more sinister motive was then suggested

It was my intention, she says, to deceive
Acting involved in the words I conceived
 Reeling in interest as I pretended no notice
I laughed at her silly suggestion of motive
Knowing all the while it was her presence
 giving my poem a direction of essence

She turned to leave and find another seat
I watched her, bemused with her tantrum  retreat
My pen-hand scrawling the last of those lines
I slipped the finished product under her wine
Reading it, her full lips mouthed the words
Smiling, she now knew her assertions absurd...

I left then, fumbling for the keys to my car
Keeping with my rule "No love at the bar"
Walking off, pleased with my choice to exit
Every part of my body language said it.
She knew I gave her a different intimacy
an unabashed version--peering into me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/26/2009 4:21:00 PM
Steve, "No love at the bar" is a good rule by which to live. I was fascinated by the imagery as I watched this story unfold. RE: Uncle Sam, I have supported Obama since I first heard him speak. When it was pointed out to me that others in my party would find this offensive, I made a quick rewrite. Thanks for reading the poem; it was meant to be a statement on rich people avoiding taxes. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/23/2009 6:00:00 AM
Well Steve make sure if she comes over she doesn't stay for lunch..LOL..I ove that comment on my piece..this is brilliant my talented friend.. you brought me into this episode in your life and let me watch.. wonderful lines..I could feel the mood and the akwardness of it all..great job!
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