A Once Pure Flower

A flower stood on a hill breezy 
allergic, she sometimes got sneezy 
A bee heard the noise 
Came and took her pure poise
and now all his friends call her easy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Healey Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 3:11 AM
Interesting metaphor! Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 4:19 PM
Great lim! Well done!
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 7:38 PM
What a humorous metaphor. Cool summer limerick . Congrats
Kitchin Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 8:31 AM
Cheryl, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and clever limerick.
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