A November Senryu

Dad gathers more crops as Mom sings in the kitchen - baked pies' aroma

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Paige Hind

Date: 11/6/2023 3:47:00 PM

Very 'homey'- I liked it. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/6/2023 3:06:00 PM

Love it!

Jay Narain

Date: 11/6/2023 9:42:00 AM

Nice one.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/6/2023 1:55:00 AM

I love pies, especially spinach ones. Wish I could get a pumpkin one! Blessings.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/5/2023 7:12:00 PM

Can I be Mom in November?! Please. ~ Tired of all this crop! ~ Dad

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/5/2023 11:51:00 AM

this is very lovely, andrea!

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/4/2023 10:52:00 PM

Hey its aroma'd to my nose..Don't suppose You've put some by.?? Wistful sigh.. A few Crumbs will all by now.' Still i'll enjoy the View you have, expressed quite true.)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/4/2023 10:45:00 PM

Oh, I like the imagery and the smell of the baked pies.