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A Note Left On Leaves

Reposed in the ghost of light below the dell Where brunette pine needles and thirsty oak leaves dwell, The wind hisses in the canopy Delivering dreams from the crabapple tree: The cotton white petals flutter toward my lips But brush on by with soft ginger wisps That shroud my eyes from the blinking sun, Then dusts the ground in a snow-like pollen; Ripe round blooms cup fondly in my hand, And the flesh blushes while it nears my breath. The taste revives my memory; I stand, And float to the tree which marks her death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/8/2012 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win xx
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Date: 6/7/2012 9:38:00 PM
Eric, congratulations :-) In Brian's contest. deep...always ~PD
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Date: 6/7/2012 8:42:00 PM
wow, this is WONDERFUL, Eric. Big congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:29:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive winning work..Congrats ..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:26:00 PM
Brunette pine needles is GORGEOUS!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/7/2012 7:39:00 AM
Congatulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 6/7/2012 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the 181 contest Eric. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2012 3:02:00 AM
Wonderful poem with great imagery.Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/7/2012 1:44:00 AM
Wonderful poem... Congrats... Terry
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:22:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece..havent read your work before but look forward to reading more...BG
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Date: 6/2/2012 8:35:00 AM
omg this is beautiful! what a pleasure to run into here...
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Eric Specian
Date: 6/2/2012 8:43:00 AM
Much thanks

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