A Note Left On Leaves

Reposed in the ghost of light below the dell
Where brunette pine needles and thirsty oak leaves dwell,
The wind hisses in the canopy
Delivering dreams from the crabapple tree:

The cotton white petals flutter toward my lips
But brush on by with soft ginger wisps
That shroud my eyes from the blinking sun,
Then dusts the ground in a snow-like pollen;

Ripe round blooms cup fondly in my hand,
And the flesh blushes while it nears my breath.
The taste revives my memory; I stand,
And float to the tree which marks her death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 12:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win xx
A   Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Eric, congratulations :-) In Brian's contest. deep...always ~PD
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 8:42 PM
wow, this is WONDERFUL, Eric. Big congrats on your well deserved win.
Kendrick Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Very expressive and descriptive winning work..Congrats ..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Brunette pine needles is GORGEOUS!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Grisetti Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Congatulations on your winning poem.
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in the 181 contest Eric. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 3:02 AM
Wonderful poem with great imagery.Congrats on your win!
O'Leary Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 1:44 AM
Wonderful poem... Congrats... Terry
Gorelick Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 10:22 AM
This is a wonderful piece..havent read your work before but look forward to reading more...BG
Moon Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 8:35 AM
omg this is beautiful! what a pleasure to run into here...
Specian Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 8:43 AM
Much thanks
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