A Note In a Bottle

It was an old brown bottle with a cork stuck in top
That I saw half buried in the sand
On a remote stretch of beach near my Pacific Northwest home
That I dug out with a stick and my hand.

I pulled out the cork and removed a note from inside
With handwriting that was old and faded;
A letter that was written over fifty years ago
Nineteen Fifty Eight on the top it was dated.

“I am writing this note and casting it out to sea
For no one in particular but mostly for me.
I am with child but with no husband by my side;
For months it has grown in me and every night I have cried.

My family sent me here to Washington state,
I’ve ruined their reputation so this is my fate.
I will do my best to raise my child right,
But it’s a future I face with terror and fright.

Should you find this bottle and read my little tale
Please say a prayer for me;
I could use your support so that I don’t fail
From the other side of the sea.”

As it turns out the bottle didn’t travel far,
In fact it was caste from this very shore.
Fifty two years later I recognize the handwriting -
I’ve seen it so many times before.

It’s the same handwriting on notes I took to school
And on every birthday card I saved;
It’s the same handwriting from the woman I called Mother
And last year buried in a grave.

I never knew the story of how I came to be
And, frankly, never thought to ask;
I was just a bastard child of a wonderful mother
Whose story I just found in this flask.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 8:47 PM
a story poem with a great twist. Congatulations on your win! Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Paula Swanson's "Just Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 7:36 PM
What beautiful poetry Joe. Many congratulations for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 5:32 PM
Congrats Joe on your super first place win in Just Poetry contest with this amazing and awesomely creative write my friend.. enjoy with luv and happy New Year...
Kershaw Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Joe, I cried. Your mother is blessed to have produced such a son. Congrats on your win. Always, Will
Rucker Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Joe, just stirring! So much emotion! A very well-deserved win!
Radke Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Oh, what a beautiful story. I suspected about half-way through, then when you confirmed my guess, I got the chills. Excellent writing. I truly enjoyed this poem. Thank you and congratulations. Deb
Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 10:13 AM
I saw a winner here when I first read it. Congratulations on your no. 1 spot. Love, joyce
Johnson Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Very interesting write Joe with a great finale. I too live in Washington State, and wonder why she was banished here. Thank you for reading and indeed I had left out a t in my poem. Thank you. Love, Joyce
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December 27, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Brilliant! This my friend, is amazing. Keep it up (for my sake and for yours)! :)
Mehta Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 11:33 AM
What a flow of the words and emotions. Very touchy , moving , poetry enough to bring tears. Joe, you have got a very poetic heart.
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