A notable pair

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Dedicated to a couple I've known for a long time. They are wonderful friends who care deeply for each other and their family! Lucky I am to be able to spend time with them.

A fantastic duo quite rare In no way can these two be square What makes Jim's heart wilt? It's Deb who is well built With C cups that cause men to stare A very intelligent guy Jim knows how age to defy His love Deb he keeps Only with her he sleeps Though many he could satisfy

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David Fisher

Date: 1/7/2024 5:58:00 PM

This makes for a great limerick. Just imagining the c cupholders.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/7/2024 6:35:00 PM

Thanks David...glad you enjoyed it. It's all in good fun!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2024 9:44:00 AM

Haha. They haven't seen my D cups. Love this.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/7/2024 2:04:00 PM

Very glad you liked this. I'm planning to travel to see this couple in early February for Jim's 60th birthday. He is very fit and a wonderful person. I think I will have this printed on a tee shirt for each of them. They do have a good sense of humor as do you!! I'm sure yours are beautiful and am glad you can participate in this fun!!!!