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Dedicated to a couple I've known for a long time. They are wonderful friends who care deeply for each other and their family! Lucky I am to be able to spend time with them. 

A notable pair

A fantastic duo quite rare
In no way can these two be square
What makes Jim's heart wilt?
It's Deb who is well built
With C cups that cause men to stare

A very intelligent guy
Jim knows how age to defy
His love Deb he keeps 
Only with her he sleeps 
Though many he could satisfy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 1/7/2024 5:58:00 PM
This makes for a great limerick. Just imagining the c cupholders.
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/7/2024 6:35:00 PM
Thanks David...glad you enjoyed it. It's all in good fun!!!
Date: 1/7/2024 9:44:00 AM
Haha. They haven't seen my D cups. Love this.
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/7/2024 2:04:00 PM
Very glad you liked this. I'm planning to travel to see this couple in early February for Jim's 60th birthday. He is very fit and a wonderful person. I think I will have this printed on a tee shirt for each of them. They do have a good sense of humor as do you!! I'm sure yours are beautiful and am glad you can participate in this fun!!!!
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