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While resting in my nook, breaths grip As lampshade marks edges of leaves; That I wander into the scene On pages afloat, a tale weaves . Listening to my restless sighs, The hero wins a maiden fair Under the rim of jeweled clouds… Yet one dark villain lurks, beware! Though moonlight hides its varnished face My eyes pursue this raging quest; And though caught in flamed paradise Late hour ushers a sleep’s request . Tucking the book, whispers I hear Unto rivers of my vivid dream, Awaiting for morn to touch its ray To finish lines from a tale, supreme. Brian's Select 2

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Date: 5/3/2016 8:49:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful placement in A Nook and a Storybook contest, Nette!
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Date: 5/3/2016 6:05:00 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your awesome first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 5/2/2016 9:38:00 AM
Hi, Nette. My heartfelt congratulations on your top win in Eve Roper's contest. Your verses are embellished with that touch of romanticism I adore. The last two lines end your poem very eloquently. It's a well-deserved win and one of my favorites. Best Wishes, Andrew.
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Date: 5/2/2016 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win with top placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/2/2016 7:36:00 AM
A lovely write... Congrats on the win :) xx
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Date: 5/2/2016 6:09:00 AM
Hi Nette, a most wonderful win with a most beautiful write. Your words always seem to just float off the page. An enchanting and creative write on the theme and a most deserving win. Your gentle words always manage to touch the Soul. Your pen runs gold Nette. Long may it do so. This has to be a seven and into my faves. Higs.....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/2/2016 2:53:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful win for a great poem:)
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Date: 5/1/2016 9:24:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/1/2016 9:13:00 PM
Congrats on your well-deserved win, Nette! Janice
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Date: 5/1/2016 8:47:00 PM
Nette, I have been there so many times. Reading into the wee hours of the morning until I can't hold my eyes open. Wonderful write.
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Date: 5/1/2016 7:43:00 PM
Nette, congratulation on your win...
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Date: 5/1/2016 6:51:00 PM
Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/28/2016 6:24:00 AM
Excellent A beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/27/2016 8:14:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 4/27/2016 3:41:00 PM
Absolutely enchanting Nette :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2016 3:24:00 PM
There are some books we cannot put down but this magnificent poem is one that an never be a put-down at all. You rise above the rest in a beguiling way!
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Date: 4/27/2016 3:10:00 PM
Lovely, Nette. I felt that enchantment of the author....the pic is also just right for the words. Perfect union. Good luck in the contest.
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