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A Nightmare With Long-Lasting Effects

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Just a horrific dream, thank God! Some memories of childhood have grown dim,

but not the memory of this one nightmare.

In my worst, most surreal childhood nightmare, my little sister and I were playing near a rain-swollen creek, in which—in a flash--she floated facedown, drowned. Then, already paralyzed, I was attacked by hundreds of loud, vengeful whippoorwills.
Even now a sound sweet to others is haunting to me~~whip poor will.
38 words, 17 syllables Date: June 28, 2020 entered in A Memory Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/10/2020 3:57:00 AM
I am glad that it was ‘just’ a dream.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/10/2020 7:54:00 AM
YES! Thanks, Kai. Janice
Date: 6/28/2020 2:31:00 PM
A tragedy like that one can never forget--a nightmare that haunts. A story well told, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/28/2020 2:51:00 PM
Thank God it was only a dream! Thanks, Vijay. Janice

Book: Shattered Sighs