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A Nightingale Sings of Dawn's Glory

Far away I hear a dulcet song~ soaring like celestial symphony; My weary heart and soul renewed like a newly bloomed white jasmine cheering for the first kiss of raindrops. The indigo sky unlocks dazzling galaxies hailing in labyrinthine melody; Reminds me of your sweet song as you serenade me at daybreak. The lulling music lingers in galactic harmony~ blending with the neon lights painting a new horizon in pastel pink like your cheeks that blush when I whisper, "I love you". A grandiose prelude to a glorious dawn unveils a thousand angels humming as you and I hand in hand sing in unison with the nightingale as she sings of dawn’s glory. 12 June 2021 "This or That, Vol 3 Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 3rd place

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Date: 2/14/2023 6:35:00 PM
Beautifully romantic. Once more back to your poem with Congratulations dear friend !
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Date: 2/14/2023 10:07:00 AM
Stunning imagery and studded with emotion. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/13/2022 8:50:00 PM
So lovely ! The Nightingale's song percolates through the air and you both inspired by her song hum tunes of love . Simply divine ! This goes into my Fav.
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:21:00 AM
A dulcet! Who speaks of dulcets? You do! Lovely!
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Date: 6/23/2021 11:59:00 AM
A musical litany in a symphony of images, JCB. Your musical soul dances through these stanzas as you conduct our views of the dawn and the nightingale's song. Really enjoyed this one my friend. Congratulations! Blessings!
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Date: 6/23/2021 1:57:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Date: 6/22/2021 10:05:00 AM
A beautiful song with splendid imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/18/2021 10:58:00 PM
My weary heart and soul renewed... A grandiose prelude to a glorious dawn unveils a thousand angels humming... Fine expressions, deserving win
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Date: 6/18/2021 12:07:00 PM
What a marvelously written poem with beautiful imagery, JCB;-) I loved it. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 6/18/2021 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Love your line, "sing in unison with the nightingale." Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Date: 6/18/2021 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2021 11:21:00 AM
oh sorry, I was mixing this up with another contest where you had to bold print the lines used!!
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:58:00 AM
I liked that stanza he gave us the best too. Not sure, but I think you needed to highlight what you used? Anyway, this is so pretty!!
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Date: 6/12/2021 7:08:00 PM
Love this, friend. It's a awesome write with so many brilliant lines. I wish you a win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 6/12/2021 2:15:00 PM
Beautiful imagery!
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